Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
An Island Beyond Conflict
Smith leaves the collapse of his marriage and moves to an isolated island. While an oil embargo and civil war destabilize the country, he remains detached from the violence.
Key Events
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Marriage Breakup — Smith's marriage ends after his wife has an affair with another man. Characters: Smith
Location: New Zealand
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Island Relocation — Smith arranges an isolated life on an island owned by a Māori tribe. Characters: Smith
Location: Coromandel Peninsula island
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Energy Crisis — An oil embargo leaves the country facing a severe energy crisis. Characters: Smith
Location: New Zealand
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Civil War Erupts — Political tension escalates into civil war and guerrilla activity. Characters: Smith
Location: New Zealand
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Island Solitude — Smith and his dog remain largely detached from the wider conflict. Characters: Smith
Location: Coromandel Peninsula island
The State Finds Smith
A bombing near the island brings police to Smith's home. The discovery of hidden explosives transforms him from an isolated civilian into a suspected guerrilla leader.
Key Events
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Town Bombing — A bomb explodes in a nearby town and destroys Smith's peaceful isolation. Characters: Smith
Location: Nearby town
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Island Arrest — Police arrive, arrest Smith, and search the island for illegal weapons. Characters: Smith
Location: Coromandel Peninsula island
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Explosives Discovered — Police find explosives Smith did not know were hidden there. Characters: Smith
Location: Coromandel Peninsula island
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Prison Transfer — Smith is taken away by boat while his dog swims after it. Characters: Smith
Location: Police boat
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Station Imprisonment — Smith is imprisoned, interrogated, and tortured at the police station. Characters: Smith
Location: Police station
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Confession Ultimatum — Authorities offer exile for a confession or a military trial with likely execution. Characters: Smith
Location: Interrogation room
Escape Into Uncertainty
Smith endures imprisonment, torture, and a coercive choice between confession and probable execution. He escapes during a prison transfer and temporarily rebuilds his life at a campground.
Key Events
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Vomiting Escape — Smith deliberately vomits to confuse his captors and escapes during transfer. Characters: Smith
Location: Prison transfer
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Campground Refuge — Smith flees the city and finds work at a small campground. Characters: Smith
Location: Small campground
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Military Occupation — A US Army unit arrives and takes over the campground. Characters: Smith
Location: Small campground
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Suspicion Returns — Smith clashes with the military commander, who suspects him of rebel sympathies. Characters: Smith
Location: Small campground
The Guerrilla's Return
The military occupation of the campground exposes Smith to renewed suspicion. Bullen's arrival pulls Smith into an attack against the forces occupying the site.
Key Events
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Bullen Reappears — Bullen arrives as a senior leader of the underground guerrilla movement. Characters: Smith, Bullen
Location: Small campground
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Attack Recruitment — Bullen draws the unwilling Smith into an attack on the military unit. Characters: Smith, Bullen
Location: Campground military position
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Successful Guerrilla Attack — The attack succeeds, but Smith and Bullen must immediately flee government forces. Characters: Smith, Bullen
Location: Campground military position
A Deliberate End
Smith and Bullen flee through the forest while government forces destroy their encampment and close in. After Bullen is fatally wounded, Smith deliberately provokes his own death in an attempt to end the violence.
Key Events
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Forest Encampment Bombing — Government forces surround and bomb the guerrilla encampment, forcing their escape. Characters: Smith, Bullen
Location: Nearby forest
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Fatal Final Confrontation — An elite squad corners them; Bullen is fatally wounded, and Smith provokes his own shooting. Characters: Smith, Bullen
Location: Nearby forest