Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Exile and Isolation
Smith retreats to a remote island after his marriage collapses due to Bullen's affair. He attempts to live peacefully while national political tensions and an oil embargo escalate into civil war.
Key Events
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Marital Breakup & Relocation — Smith moves to an island after his wife's affair with Bullen. Characters: Smith
Location: Coromandel Peninsula
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Island Exile Routine — Smith lives peacefully with his dog, ignoring national politics. Characters: Smith
Location: Island
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National Crisis Eruption — An oil embargo triggers an energy crisis and escalating civil war. Characters: Smith
Location: New Zealand
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Town Bombing — A nearby town explosion violently shatters Smith's quiet existence. Characters: Smith
Location: Nearby Town
State Crackdown and Interrogation
A town bombing triggers a police raid on Smith's island, leading to his arrest and imprisonment. Authorities discover an unknown explosives cache, and Jesperson offers him a political deal in exchange for a confession.
Key Events
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Town Bombing — A nearby town explosion violently shatters Smith's quiet existence. Characters: Smith
Location: Nearby Town
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Police Island Raid — Police arrive to arrest Smith and search for illegal weapons. Characters: Smith
Location: Island
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Explosives Cache Discovery — Police find a hidden cache of explosives Smith did not know about. Characters: Smith
Location: Island
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Station Imprisonment — Smith faces imprisonment, interrogation, and torture by authorities. Characters: Smith
Location: Police Station
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Jesperson Interrogation Deal — Former schoolmate Jesperson offers Smith expulsion in exchange for a confession. Characters: Smith
Location: Police Station
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Prison Escape Execution — Smith fakes illness to confuse guards and successfully breaks custody. Characters: Smith
Location: Prison Transport
Forced into Guerrilla Conflict
Smith escapes custody and finds work at a campground, but US Army forces occupy the site. Bullen returns as a guerrilla leader and forces Smith to participate in an attack against the military unit.
Key Events
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Prison Escape Execution — Smith fakes illness to confuse guards and successfully breaks custody. Characters: Smith
Location: Prison Transport
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Campground Employment — Smith flees urban areas and secures employment at a small campground. Characters: Smith
Location: Campground
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US Army Occupation — US Army forces occupy the campground, disrupting Smith's routine. Characters: Smith
Location: Campground
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Commander Clash — Smith confronts US commander Willoughby over suspected rebel sympathies. Characters: Smith
Location: Campground
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Bullen's Guerrilla Return — Bullen arrives as a senior guerrilla leader, escalating local tensions. Characters: Smith, Bullen
Location: Campground
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Forced Military Assault — Bullen compels Smith to join an attack on the military unit. Characters: Smith, Bullen
Location: Campground
Forest Pursuit and Tragic End
After a successful attack, Smith and Bullen flee into the forest while government forces bomb their camp. Cornered by Jesperson's squad, Bullen is fatally wounded, prompting Smith to deliberately provoke his own execution.
Key Events
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Forced Military Assault — Bullen compels Smith to join an attack on the military unit. Characters: Smith, Bullen
Location: Campground
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Successful Base Attack — The pair successfully attacks the base and flees into the woods. Characters: Smith, Bullen
Location: Campground
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Forest Pursuit Begins — Government troops hunt the fugitives, trapping them in a dense forest. Characters: Smith, Bullen
Location: Forest
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Guerrilla Camp Bombardment — State forces destroy the guerrilla encampment, forcing a desperate retreat. Characters: Smith, Bullen
Location: Guerrilla Camp
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Elite Squad Cornering — Jesperson's elite squad corners the exhausted pair in the woods. Characters: Smith, Bullen
Location: Forest
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Bullen's Fatal Wounding — Bullen suffers a fatal wound during the intense forest firefight. Characters: Smith, Bullen
Location: Forest
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Smith's Deliberate Sacrifice — Smith provokes Jesperson to shoot him, choosing a deliberate end. Characters: Smith
Location: Forest
Recluse Smith is drawn into a revolutionary struggle between guerrillas and right-wingers in New Zealand. Implicated in a murder and framed as a revolutionary conspirator, Smith tries to maintain an attitude of non-violence while caught between warring factions.