Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A New Guardian of Measures
The department's chief deputy survives an engineered accident and recruits the protagonist to assume leadership. The new leader learns that corruption extends above the immediate political operator.
Key Events
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Engineered Car Accident — A corrupt politician engineers a car accident that nearly kills the department's chief deputy.
Location: City road
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Leadership Transfer — The injured chief deputy enlists the former boxer to take over his position.
Location: Department of Weights and Measures
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Higher Corruption Revealed — The chief deputy warns that figures higher than Cavanaugh control the organization.
Location: Department office
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Team Warning — The new leader stresses the department's importance and warns that corruption remains a danger.
Location: Department office
Honesty in the Field
The department investigates dishonest merchants using altered weights and inaccurate measurements. Repeated bribe attempts fail, establishing the protagonist's uncompromising principles and straining his relationship with Janet.
Key Events
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Market Investigation — Inspectors investigate a market accused of adding lead weights to stewing chickens.
Location: Market
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Market Bribe Refused — The market is fined after an attempted bribe fails to stop enforcement.
Location: Market
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Gas Station Inspection — The department investigates a gas station accused of shortchanging customers.
Location: Gas station
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Second Bribe Rejected — The gas station is fined after another merchant attempts to buy silence.
Location: Gas station
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Fiancée Objects — Janet criticizes the protagonist's relentless and rigid pursuit of anti-corruption work. Characters: Janet Henry
Location: Janet Henry's home
The Political Trap
Cavanaugh offers the protagonist a comfortable position and then uses false charges to demonstrate his influence. The mayor makes another lucrative offer, which is also rejected.
Key Events
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Cushy Job Offered — Cavanaugh offers the protagonist a comfortable job in exchange for ignoring his citywide racket.
Location: Political office
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False Charges — After refusing the offer, the protagonist is framed for drunk driving and robbery.
Location: City streets
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Manufactured Exoneration — Cavanaugh arranges the protagonist's exoneration, implying that he can control his fate.
Location: Political office
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Mayor's Job Offer — The mayor offers the protagonist a high-paying job, but the offer is rejected. Characters: Mayor
Location: Mayor's office
The Orphanage Scandal
The protagonist discovers that Canning is defrauding an orphanage through incomplete food shipments. Public exposure angers Janet and causes the engagement to end.
Key Events
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Orphanage Fraud Discovered — Canning is exposed for sending half-sized food shipments while charging a local orphanage full price. Characters: Janet Henry, Abel Canning
Location: Abel Canning's business
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Newspaper Exposure — The orphanage fraud is released to newspapers after Canning's political connections are discovered. Characters: Janet Henry, Abel Canning, Mayor
Location: Newspaper office
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Engagement Broken — Janet becomes angry over the exposure and breaks off the engagement. Characters: Janet Henry
Location: Private residence
Evidence Under Fire
Cavanaugh's hired attacker attempts to seize the evidence, but the scheme produces a blackmail check instead. Canning and the mayor try to destroy the papers before Janet's tip brings the police.
Key Events
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Evidence Targeted — Cavanaugh hires an ex-wrestler to attack the protagonist and steal evidence against Canning. Characters: Abel Canning
Location: City streets
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Blackmail Check — Canning gives the attacker a five-thousand-dollar check for an apartment key instead of receiving the evidence. Characters: Abel Canning
Location: Cocktail party
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Evidence Mistaken — The protagonist punches the attacker and discovers that the stolen item is actually Canning's check. Characters: Abel Canning
Location: Cocktail party
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Evidence Found — Canning and his accomplice find the evidence hidden behind wallpaper in a closet. Characters: Abel Canning, Mayor
Location: Apartment closet
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Evidence Burning Stopped — The protagonist arrives just in time and prevents Canning and his accomplice from burning the papers. Characters: Abel Canning, Mayor
Location: Apartment closet
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Police Arrest Corrupt Officials — Janet's tip brings the police, who arrest Canning and the other corrupt official. Characters: Janet Henry, Abel Canning, Mayor
Location: Apartment
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Engagement Restored — The engagement is restored, and the protagonist presents Janet with a ring bought on installments. Characters: Janet Henry
Location: Private residence