Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Fired Mechanic
Malcolm's life is upended when his boss discovers his unauthorized tram project, leading to his termination and financial crisis. A local shop-owner advises him to take in a boarder to survive.
Key Events
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Malcolm at MTA Work — Malcolm works for the transit authority while secretly obsessed with trams. Characters: Malcolm Hughes
Location: Metropolitan Transit Authority
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Boss Discovers Mini-Tram — Boss finds Malcolm built a tram using company resources during work hours. Characters: Malcolm Hughes
Location: Workshop
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Malcolm Sacked — Malcolm loses his job and income due to the unauthorized tram project. Characters: Malcolm Hughes
Location: Transit Authority Office
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Shop-owner Advises Boarder — Facing financial ruin, Malcolm receives advice to rent out a room. Characters: Malcolm Hughes
Location: Local Shop
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Frank Moves In — Frank takes the boarder position, introducing a new dynamic to the household. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker
Location: Malcolm's Cottage
Unlikely Roommates
Frank moves in with his brassy girlfriend Judith, introducing criminal elements into Malcolm's quiet life. Despite their differences, the trio gradually forms an awkward but functional friendship.
Key Events
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Frank Moves In — Frank takes the boarder position, introducing a new dynamic to the household. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker
Location: Malcolm's Cottage
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Judith Arrives — Frank's girlfriend Judith moves in, completing the trio. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker, Judith
Location: Malcolm's Cottage
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Frank Reveals Criminal Past — Frank discloses he is a petty criminal recently released from prison. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker
Location: Cottage
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Split Getaway Car Demo — Malcolm demonstrates a two-part vehicle that successfully evades police after a small theft. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker
Location: Streets
The Heist Blueprint
Malcolm leverages his mechanical genius to assist Frank's petty crimes, demonstrating split vehicles and remote-controlled hold-ups. A failed payroll attempt teaches them the need for a larger, more coordinated operation.
Key Events
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Split Getaway Car Demo — Malcolm demonstrates a two-part vehicle that successfully evades police after a small theft. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker
Location: Streets
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Payroll Hold-up Attempt — Malcolm remotely attempts a payroll robbery using a model car and blank gun. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker
Location: Payroll Route
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Control Centre Discovery — Frank finds Malcolm's remote operation hub and joins the heist live. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker
Location: Malcolm's Bedroom
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Cash Lost in Drain — The planned escape route fails, and the stolen money is knocked off the trailer. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker
Location: Street Drain
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Bank Heist Planning — The trio devises an audacious plan to steal $250,000 from a major bank. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker, Judith
Location: Cottage
The Great Bank Robbery
The trio executes an audacious $250,000 bank heist using robot bins, a modified van, and a spring-loaded arm. They successfully secure the cash but must immediately adapt to avoid capture.
Key Events
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Bank Heist Planning — The trio devises an audacious plan to steal $250,000 from a major bank. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker, Judith
Location: Cottage
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Robot Bins Deployed — Remote-controlled robot bins are maneuvered to trap guards on a walkway. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker, Judith
Location: Bank Interior
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Walkway Robbery Executed — The van's arm breaks the window, and robots push cash into the van's roof chute. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker, Judith
Location: Bank Walkway
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Van Disguised as Ice-Cream Truck — The trio quickly modifies the van's appearance to blend in and avoid suspicion. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker, Judith
Location: Lane
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Police Chase Begins — Routine patrol officers question the truck, prompting Frank to speed away and trigger a chase. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker, Judith
Location: Suburban Street
Escape to Lisbon
A high-speed police chase forces the trio to deploy an ice-cream truck disguise and a mechanical decoy. They ultimately escape in Malcolm's custom mini-tram, launder the money in Portugal, and plan their next crime.
Key Events
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Police Chase Begins — Routine patrol officers question the truck, prompting Frank to speed away and trigger a chase. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker, Judith
Location: Suburban Street
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Ned Kelly Decoy Deployed — A decoy dummy armed with shotguns is sent out to distract pursuing officers. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker, Judith
Location: Suburban Street
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Tram Escape Revealed — Police scan the area but only see a tram pulling away, which is revealed to be Malcolm's vehicle carrying the trio and money. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker, Judith
Location: Suburban Street
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Lisbon Bank Deposit — Frank deposits the stolen money at a bank in Lisbon, completing the financial laundering. Characters: Frank Baker
Location: Lisbon, Portugal
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Cafe Meeting and New Plan — The trio reunites at a cafe and lays plans for another daring heist. Characters: Malcolm Hughes, Frank Baker, Judith
Location: Local Cafe
Malcolm is a chronically shy mechanical genius, who has just been fired for building his own tram. He gets Frank, who has just been released from jail, to move in to help pay the bills. With Frank's help, Malcolm turns to a life of crime.