Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Voice Through The Tunnel
Marianne lives a lonely, repetitive life and revisits her teenage fascination with Peter Kraus. After hearing Huber's voice on the subway, she becomes intensely interested in him.
Key Events
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Marianne's Lonely Routine — Marianne lives alone, works at a funeral home, swims indoors, commutes, and watches television in bed. Characters: Marianne
Location: Munich
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The Old Sugar Baby Memory — Television makes Marianne revisit her teenage crush on singer Peter Kraus and his song "Sugar Baby." Characters: Marianne
Location: Marianne's apartment
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A Voice On The Subway — Marianne notices the young blond driver and becomes attracted to his announcing voice. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Subway train
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Learning Huber's Name — Through subterfuge and detective work, Marianne discovers the driver's name and personal circumstances. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Munich subway network
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The Favorite Candy Bar — Marianne learns Huber's favorite candy bar and uses that knowledge to plan an approach. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Subway station
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Marianne Reinvents Herself — Marianne exercises, dresses more smartly, cooks, redecorates, and installs a new double bed. Characters: Marianne
Location: Marianne's apartment
Engineering A Chance Encounter
Marianne investigates Huber and tracks his subway shifts. She changes her habits, appearance, apartment, and cooking in preparation for a possible relationship.
Key Events
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Marianne Reinvents Herself — Marianne exercises, dresses more smartly, cooks, redecorates, and installs a new double bed. Characters: Marianne
Location: Marianne's apartment
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Crossing His Route — Marianne interprets the complicated shift roster and occasionally crosses Huber's path with a smile. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Subway network
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The Wife's Absence — Marianne learns that Huber's wife will be away for two weeks because of a family death. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Munich subway station
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An Offer At The Machine — Marianne offers Huber the candy bar she has just bought, saying she has changed her mind. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Subway station
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Coffee Together — The candy-bar exchange leads Marianne and Huber to have coffee together. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Coffee shop
The Burnt Roast
Marianne uses Huber's wife's absence to invite him for coffee and dinner. His delay triggers a destructive breakdown, but his eventual arrival begins their intimate relationship.
Key Events
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The Dinner Invitation — Marianne invites Huber to dinner at her apartment the following evening. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Coffee shop
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The Prepared Roast — Marianne cooks a roast and prepares a romantic table while waiting for Huber. Characters: Marianne
Location: Marianne's apartment
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The Broken Dinner Table — When Huber fails to arrive on time, Marianne sobs and destroys the table setting and other furnishings. Characters: Marianne
Location: Marianne's apartment
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Huber Arrives Late — Huber finally arrives, explaining that an emergency at work caused his delay. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Marianne's apartment
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A New Shared Life — They make love, and Huber moves in with Marianne as their relationship becomes domestic. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Marianne's apartment
A Brief Domestic Dream
Huber moves in, and the couple enjoy holidays, motorcycle rides, personal confessions, and a shared fantasy of happiness. Their private romance grows into a public celebration at a dance.
Key Events
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A New Shared Life — They make love, and Huber moves in with Marianne as their relationship becomes domestic. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Marianne's apartment
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Motorcycle Excursions — Marianne takes holidays and buys Huber clothes; Huber takes her places on his motorcycle. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Munich streets
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Private Confessions — They share intimacies about Marianne's unhappy childhood and Huber's fear of causing an unavoidable fatality. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Marianne's apartment
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Dreaming Of Permanence — They enjoy each other's company, while Marianne fantasizes about a lasting life together. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Munich
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The Sugarbaby Dance — When the band plays "Sugarbaby," Marianne and Huber dance freely as other couples give them space. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Rock and roll dance hall
Bruises At The Dance
The couple's joyful dance is shattered when Huber's wife discovers them and assaults Marianne. Huber is taken away, while Marianne remains bruised at the subway platform with a candy bar.
Key Events
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The Sugarbaby Dance — When the band plays "Sugarbaby," Marianne and Huber dance freely as other couples give them space. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Rock and roll dance hall
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The Wife's Assault — Huber's wife finds Marianne's address, storms into the hall, assaults Marianne, and separates the couple. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Rock and roll dance hall
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Huber Is Taken Away — Huber cowers among the onlookers while his wife marches him out, leaving Marianne bruised and dazed. Characters: Marianne, Huber
Location: Rock and roll dance hall
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Candy Bar At The Platform — Still bruised, Marianne stands at the platform edge and holds out a candy bar as the train approaches. Characters: Marianne
Location: Subway platform