Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Saloon Killing
A drunken man damages Dalton's guitar and challenges him to draw. In the confusion, Dalton shoots and kills the man, an incident that lands him in jail.
Key Events
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Dalton Explains His Burial — Dalton explains how he came to be buried alive and insists it was not his choice. Characters: Dalton
Location: Desert
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Guitar Damaged in Saloon — A drunken man damages Dalton's guitar, beginning the trouble that changes his life. Characters: Dalton
Location: Saloon
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Challenge to Draw — The drunken man challenges Dalton to draw, although Dalton has no gun. Characters: Dalton
Location: Saloon
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Accidental Saloon Shooting — The man hands Dalton a gun, and confusion ends with Dalton shooting and killing him. Characters: Dalton
Location: Saloon
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Dalton Jailed — The killing lands Dalton in jail and sets off a chain of life-changing events. Characters: Dalton
Location: Jail
An Unwanted Sheriff
In Toonstone, Dalton is treated as a hero despite describing himself as a musician. After he admits to accidentally killing the outlaw found on Acondo's buffalo, the mayor makes him sheriff.
Key Events
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Dalton Treated as a Hero — Dalton is treated as a hero after outlaws die, though he says he is only a musician. Characters: Dalton
Location: Toonstone
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Body Found on Buffalo — A body is discovered on the buffalo Acondo brought into town. Characters: Acondo, Dalton
Location: Toonstone
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Suspicion Falls on Acondo — Townspeople suspect Acondo, but Dalton admits that he accidentally killed the man. Characters: Acondo, Dalton
Location: Toonstone
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Dead Outlaw Identified — The dead outlaw is identified as Trigger Happy Wilson. Characters: Dalton
Location: Toonstone
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Dalton Made Sheriff — The grateful mayor makes Dalton sheriff despite Dalton's protests. Characters: Dalton
Location: Toonstone
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Dalton Urged to Serve — A skeptical local challenges the appointment, while Dalton is urged to take the job and play music at the saloon. Characters: Dalton
Location: Toonstone
Threats and Trust
Dalton struggles with his lack of gun skill and receives help from Finch and an experienced former lawman. Visitors seek a purple doomsday device, while Dalton later protects Gail from outlaws and receives an old lawman's badge.
Key Events
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Help with Gun Skills — Dalton's lack of gun skill becomes a problem, and Finch helps him alongside an experienced former lawman. Characters: Dalton, Finch
Location: Toonstone
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Visitors Seek Device — Visitors arrive demanding a purple doomsday device. Characters: Dalton
Location: Toonstone
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Visitors Sent Away — The townspeople deny having the device and direct the visitors toward Town City. Characters: Dalton
Location: Toonstone
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Outlaws Threaten Gail — Outlaws threaten Gail, prompting Dalton to confront them. Characters: Dalton, Gail
Location: Toonstone
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Dalton Defends Gail — A gunfight leaves the attackers dead and Gail safe. Characters: Dalton, Gail
Location: Toonstone
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Badge Given to Dalton — Dalton receives an old lawman's badge as a sign of trust. Characters: Dalton
Location: Toonstone
Buried and Warned
The narrative returns to Dalton buried in the desert, where talking cacti offer cryptic advice. Acondo finds him and helps him realize Toonstone is in danger.
Key Events
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Dalton Buried in Desert — The story returns to Dalton buried up to his neck in the desert. Characters: Dalton
Location: Desert
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Cacti Offer Advice — Talking cacti offer Dalton cryptic advice. Characters: Dalton
Location: Desert
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Acondo Finds Dalton — Acondo finds Dalton and helps him understand that Toonstone is in danger. Characters: Acondo, Dalton
Location: Desert
The Unfinished Stand
Two Eyed Jack arrives in Toonstone looking for the former lawman. Dalton's allies debate whether to help face the threat, but the excerpt ends before the confrontation is resolved.
Key Events
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Two Eyed Jack Arrives — Back in town, Two Eyed Jack arrives looking for the former lawman. Characters: Dalton
Location: Toonstone
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Friends Debate Helping — Dalton's allies debate standing together as the former lawman warns them not to risk their lives; the confrontation remains unresolved. Characters: Dalton
Location: Toonstone