Plot Analysis Summary
A massage appointment becomes an increasingly personal debate about art, belief, responsibility, wealth, and self-image.
Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Quiet Household
Nina returns home to DeeDee's practical household report. The gardener's absence and the prepared dinner establish an orderly but interrupted afternoon.
Key Events
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Nina Returns Home — Nina returns home and finds DeeDee handling household responsibilities. Characters: Nina
Location: Nina's home
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Household Update — DeeDee reports that the gardener cleared underbrush, applied fertilizer, and left bills for Nina to sign. Characters: Nina, DeeDee
Location: Nina's home
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Dinner Prepared — DeeDee explains that dinner has been prepared for Nina. Characters: Nina, DeeDee
Location: Nina's home
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Gardener's Absence — DeeDee says the gardener will be away for several weeks and asks about temporary help from his nephew. Characters: Nina, DeeDee
Location: Nina's home
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Fitch Arrives — Fitch arrives for an appointment before Nina can settle into her afternoon. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
An Unexpected Appointment
Fitch arrives even though Douglas, who arranged the meeting, is absent. Nina's surprise gives way to the beginning of the massage and an uneasy professional encounter.
Key Events
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Douglas Is Absent — Nina is surprised that Douglas, who arranged the meeting, has not appeared or properly warned her. Characters: Nina, Fitch, Douglas
Location: Nina's home
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Treatment Begins — Fitch sets up and begins working on Nina during the appointment. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
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Magnets Applied — Fitch uses magnets, claiming they are especially effective on difficult areas. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
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Fitch's Traveling Career — Their conversation turns to Fitch's long career and extensive travels. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
Art And Wonder
The massage conversation moves from Fitch's travels to Nina's gallery and the installation about fashion as bondage. Their disagreement over contemporary art expands into a debate over science, belief, and mysticism.
Key Events
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Nina Discusses Art — Nina explains her interest in art and discusses the artists she represents. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
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Gallery Invitation — Nina invites Fitch to visit her gallery for an installation about women's fashion as bondage. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
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Art Disagreement — Their differing views of contemporary art develop into a wider argument. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
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Science And Mysticism — They debate belief, science, mysticism, and the loss of wonder. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
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Hopi Healing Account — Fitch recalls seeing Hopi medicine men heal people with their hands and crystals. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
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Certainty Challenged — Nina challenges what she sees as Fitch's patronizing certainty. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
Memory Beneath Certainty
Nina questions Fitch's background and responsibilities, prompting his memory of his father's criticism. Fitch interprets the memory as evidence of how responsibility and expectation trap parents.
Key Events
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Disbelief As Faith — Fitch insists that modern disbelief has become another kind of faith. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
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Questions About Fitch — Nina questions Fitch about his background and his lack of conventional responsibilities. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
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Bow Tie Memory — Fitch recalls his father criticizing his perfectly tied bow tie when he was seventeen. Characters: Fitch, Fitch
Location: Fitch's recollection
The Unresolved Judgment
Fitch turns the discussion toward Nina's wealth and self-image by suggesting she feels like a failure. Nina defends what she earned, but the argument ends without resolution.
Key Events
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Failure Accusation — Fitch suggests Nina feels like a failure despite owning many beautiful things. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
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Nina Defends Herself — Nina rejects Fitch's judgment and insists she earned everything she possesses. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home
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Unresolved Argument — Nina demands recognition of her accomplishments while Fitch continues challenging her emotional defenses. Characters: Nina, Fitch
Location: Nina's home