Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Science Meets Criminal Violence
A physics professor pursues an ambitious light-conversion project while becoming involved in a bank robbery case. The capture of a surviving robber places him in the sights of a criminal kingpin.
Key Events
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Ultraviolet Force Research — A physics professor develops material intended to convert ultraviolet light into mechanical force.
Location: University laboratory
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Bank Robbery Begins — A criminal crew enters a bank while a loan application is being completed. Characters: Kermit Haas
Location: Local bank
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Surviving Robber Captured — A guard kills two robbers, while the professor captures the surviving nephew of a crime boss. Characters: Kermit Haas
Location: Local bank
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Assassination Order — Haas orders the professor eliminated to prevent testimony against the captured robber. Characters: Kermit Haas
Location: Criminal headquarters
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Bombed Sports Car — A laboratory assistant is killed when a bomb detonates in the professor's sports car. Characters: Kermit Haas
Location: University campus
Paralysis and Isolation
Assassination attempts escalate from a car bombing to a devastating attack that leaves the professor paraplegic. Threats against his girlfriend make him abandon testimony and withdraw from ordinary life.
Key Events
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Police Protection Accepted — After the bombing, the professor reluctantly accepts police protection.
Location: University campus
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Laundry Room Attack — A disguised henchman breaks the professor's back with a steel pipe before police interrupt the attack. Characters: Kermit Haas
Location: Apartment laundry room
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Permanent Paralysis — Doctors tell the professor that the spinal injury has caused permanent paraplegia.
Location: Hospital
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Threat Against Loved One — A criminal lieutenant threatens the professor's girlfriend, forcing him to withdraw from testimony. Characters: Kermit Haas
Location: Apartment
The Armor Breakthrough
An official investigator reveals the criminal kingpin's role and points toward his records. Inspired by medieval armor, the professor finally creates a material and builds a powerful protective suit.
Key Events
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Travis Offers a Lead — Travis brings a mug book, explains Haas's role, and says the criminal records are the key to stopping him. Characters: Arthur Travis
Location: University campus
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Armor Inspiration — An art exhibit of medieval armor inspires the professor to imagine a protective mechanical suit.
Location: Art gallery
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Material Breakthrough — After many failed attempts, the professor produces a successful batch of the experimental material.
Location: University laboratory
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Suit Construction — Borrowed expertise and materials enable construction of armor that restores mobility and provides strength.
Location: University laboratory
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Mobile Armored Base — A step van is equipped as a mobile base for entering and operating the armored suit.
Location: Warehouse
Hunting the Attackers
The newly armored vigilante uses supplied records to lure the attacking henchman to a warehouse. The confrontation ends with the henchman's accidental death and exposes the danger of the new mission.
Key Events
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Girlfriend Sent Away — The professor reconciles with his girlfriend, then secretly arranges an exhibition to keep her out of town.
Location: Apartment
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Henchman Located — A student's policeman cousin supplies information about the henchman's location and habits.
Location: University campus
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Warehouse Pursuit — The henchman follows the van to the warehouse after being lured by a threat of testimony. Characters: Kermit Haas
Location: Warehouse
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Henchman Falls — The seemingly invulnerable armored figure pursues the henchman, whose escape route collapses and causes his death. Characters: Kermit Haas
Location: Warehouse
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Secret Revealed — The returning girlfriend confronts the professor, who admits the protective scheme and explains the accidental death.
Location: Apartment
The Ledger Victory
The vigilante attacks the criminal kingpin's fortified mansion and takes the ledgers rather than killing him. The records secure an indictment, while an investigator hints at future cases.
Key Events
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Secret Revealed — The returning girlfriend confronts the professor, who admits the protective scheme and explains the accidental death.
Location: Apartment
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Mansion Assault — The armored vigilante defeats the mansion guards and forces Haas into his basement vault. Characters: Kermit Haas
Location: Haas's fortified mansion
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Ledger Books Taken — Haas fires repeatedly, but the armored figure survives and takes the criminal ledger books instead of harming him. Characters: Kermit Haas
Location: Basement vault
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Anonymous Records Tip — Travis receives an anonymous tip about the hidden records, leading to Haas's indictment. Characters: Arthur Travis, Kermit Haas
Location: University campus
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Future Problems Suggested — Travis cryptically suggests that he wants to discuss additional problems with the armored vigilante. Characters: Arthur Travis
Location: University campus