Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Service Beneath Family Talk
Joey is questioned about work and military service during a family gathering. Her resentment toward being taken to recruiting and her mother's worry establish the pressure surrounding her impending departure.
Key Events
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Family Questions Joey — Joey is questioned about truck work and possible service in Iraq or Afghanistan. Characters: Joey
Location: Family gathering
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Military Preparation Revealed — The conversation reveals that Joey is preparing for military service. Characters: Joey
Location: Family gathering
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Mother's Worry — Joey's mother worries about her future, while Joey resents being taken to recruiting. Characters: Joey
Location: Family gathering
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Presents for Rayna's Children — Joey says she is bringing presents to Rayna's children. Characters: Joey
Location: Family gathering
A Dream of Canada
Joey tells Rayna about escaping to Canada and imagines a new life in British Columbia or Montreal. Their romantic connection becomes explicit as the fantasy develops.
Key Events
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Canada Escape Proposed — Joey tells Rayna that they could escape together to Canada. Characters: Joey, Rayna
Location: Rayna's home
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British Columbia Fantasy — They imagine becoming pot farmers in British Columbia. Characters: Joey, Rayna
Location: Rayna's home
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Montreal Fantasy — They also imagine learning French in Montreal and joke about French kissing. Characters: Joey, Rayna
Location: Rayna's home
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Joey Counts Her Money — Joey says she has $636 to support the proposed escape. Characters: Joey, Rayna
Location: Rayna's home
Agreement Against Doubt
Rayna questions whether Joey's $636 can support them. Joey insists on leaving, and Rayna eventually agrees, briefly turning the escape fantasy into a shared plan.
Key Events
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Rayna Questions Survival — Rayna questions how they could survive in Canada on Joey's money. Characters: Joey, Rayna
Location: Rayna's home
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Joey Insists on Leaving — Joey insists she will go to Canada even if Rayna refuses. Characters: Joey, Rayna
Location: Rayna's home
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Rayna Agrees — Rayna finally agrees to go, and Joey celebrates their decision. Characters: Joey, Rayna
Location: Rayna's home
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Second Family Gathering — Joey returns to a family gathering while continuing to pursue money for her plans. Characters: Joey
Location: Family gathering
The Cost of Leaving
Joey seeks additional money from a relative but receives only $100 and an insulting warning. The encounter exposes the social pressure surrounding her plans and sexuality.
Key Events
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Joey Requests Funding — Joey asks a relative for $200 to help fund her plans. Characters: Joey
Location: Family gathering
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Partial Financial Help — The relative offers only $100 and warns Joey not to do anything foolish. Characters: Joey
Location: Family gathering
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Unwelcome Sexual Comments — The relative makes unwelcome comments about Joey's sexuality. Characters: Joey
Location: Family gathering
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Visit to Rayna's Home — Joey visits Rayna and the children while Roy works outside in the fields. Characters: Joey, Rayna, Roy
Location: Rayna's home
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Present Given to Child — Joey gives one of the girls a present. Characters: Joey
Location: Rayna's home
Departure Without Certainty
Joey visits Rayna's home, gives a child a present, and learns about a care package. The announcement of her Afghanistan departure and the awkward farewell leave the Canadian escape unresolved.
Key Events
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Care Package Revealed — Joey learns that a care package has been prepared for her. Characters: Joey, Rayna, Roy
Location: Rayna's home
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Departure Announced — Rayna tells Roy that Joey is leaving for Afghanistan the next day. Characters: Joey, Rayna, Roy
Location: Rayna's home and fields
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Care Package Refused — A child refuses to retrieve the care package, creating an awkward farewell. Characters: Joey, Rayna
Location: Rayna's home
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Vehicle Departure Preparations — Indistinct conversations and hurried instructions surround a vehicle as departure approaches. Characters: Joey
Location: Vehicle area
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Uncertain Final Departure — Someone warns that they are running out of data while Joey's departure remains imminent. Characters: Joey
Location: Vehicle area