Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Bargain with the Mansion
The Allardyces rent their remote mansion to the Rolf family and set the unusual condition of leaving meals for their secluded mother. Marian becomes increasingly absorbed in the house as strange signs of renewal begin.
Key Events
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The Summer Rental Offer — The Allardyces offer the Rolf family a summer stay for $900 with a meal arrangement for their secluded mother. Characters: Ben Rolf, Marian Rolf, David 'Davey' Rolf, Arnold Allardyce, Roz Allardyce
Location: The mansion
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Arrival with Aunt Elizabeth — The Rolf family arrives at the remote mansion with Ben's elderly aunt. Characters: Ben Rolf, Marian Rolf, David 'Davey' Rolf, Aunt Elizabeth
Location: The mansion
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The Upstairs Meal Arrangement — The family is expected to leave meals outside the locked bedroom of the secluded elderly woman. Characters: Marian Rolf, Arnold Allardyce, Roz Allardyce
Location: The upstairs suite
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Marian Claims the House — Marian becomes absorbed in maintaining the mansion, wears clothing from the upstairs suite, and distances herself from her family. Characters: Marian Rolf, Ben Rolf, David 'Davey' Rolf
Location: The mansion
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Portraits of Former Occupants — Marian is drawn to portraits showing people from different eras, apparently former occupants of the house. Characters: Marian Rolf
Location: The upstairs sitting room
Renewal at a Cost
Accidents and unexplained restorations suggest that the mansion responds to the family's injuries and losses. Aunt Elizabeth becomes ill and dies, while Marian remains detached from the family.
Key Events
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The Plant Revives — After Davey hurts himself while playing, a dead plant begins to grow again. Characters: David 'Davey' Rolf, Marian Rolf
Location: The mansion
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Ben's Champagne Injury — Ben cuts his hand on a champagne bottle, followed by the mysterious repair of a dead light bulb. Characters: Ben Rolf, Marian Rolf
Location: The mansion
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The Grinning Hearse Driver — Ben is haunted by the image of the grinning hearse driver he saw at his mother's funeral years earlier. Characters: Ben Rolf, The Chauffeur
Location: The mansion
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Aunt Elizabeth Falls Ill — Aunt Elizabeth suddenly becomes ill as Marian grows increasingly absorbed in the house. Characters: Aunt Elizabeth, Ben Rolf, Marian Rolf
Location: The mansion
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Elizabeth's Death and Bloom — Elizabeth dies, and the dead flowers bloom; Marian does not attend the funeral. Characters: Aunt Elizabeth, Marian Rolf, Ben Rolf
Location: The mansion and solarium
The Escape That Fails
Ben confronts Marian and decides to leave, then sees the house restoring itself and concludes it is alive. A blocked road and his vision of Marian as the chauffeur leave him catatonic.
Key Events
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Ben Confronts Marian — Ben angrily confronts Marian about her obsession and decides to leave the next day. Characters: Ben Rolf, Marian Rolf
Location: The mansion
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The Mansion Restores Itself — Ben sees old shingles and siding fall away as new ones replace them. Characters: Ben Rolf
Location: Outside the mansion
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The Blocked Escape — Convinced the house is alive, Ben tries to leave with Davey, but a tree blocks the road. Characters: Ben Rolf, David 'Davey' Rolf
Location: The road from the mansion
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Ben Sees Marian Driving — Ben sees Marian as the chauffeur and falls catatonic. Characters: Ben Rolf, Marian Rolf, David 'Davey' Rolf
Location: The blocked road
The House Reclaims Its Family
Marian rescues Davey from the pool, but her return to the upstairs suite reveals her inexplicable aging. Ben falls from the attic, Davey is killed by a collapsing chimney, and the Allardyces celebrate the restored mansion.
Key Events
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The Pool Turns Violent — The pool becomes violently wavy and pulls Davey under while Ben watches in a catatonic state. Characters: Ben Rolf, Marian Rolf, David 'Davey' Rolf
Location: The swimming pool
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Marian Rescues Davey — Marian rescues Davey, and the incident awakens Ben from his catatonia. Characters: Marian Rolf, David 'Davey' Rolf, Ben Rolf
Location: The swimming pool
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Marian Returns Upstairs — Marian agrees to leave but goes inside to inform the upstairs woman; Ben follows when she fails to return. Characters: Ben Rolf, Marian Rolf
Location: The upstairs suite
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Marian's Aged Appearance — Ben finds Marian inexplicably aged, and she tells him she has been waiting for him. Characters: Ben Rolf, Marian Rolf
Location: The upstairs suite
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Ben Falls from the Attic — Ben falls from the attic window and lands on the car's windshield as Davey waits outside. Characters: Ben Rolf, David 'Davey' Rolf
Location: The mansion and car
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The Chimney Collapses — Davey runs toward the house and is killed when a chimney collapses on him. Characters: David 'Davey' Rolf
Location: The mansion
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The Allardyces Welcome Their Mother — The Allardyces celebrate the restored house and the return of their mother; portraits of the Rolf family and Aunt Elizabeth appear. Characters: Arnold Allardyce, Roz Allardyce
Location: The restored mansion