Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A House Built on Fear
Treat supports the household through robbery while the younger brother remains isolated inside their rundown Newark home. Their domestic life is defined by dependence and fear of the outside world.
Key Events
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The Newark Row House — Treat and his younger brother live alone in a rundown Newark row house. Characters: Treat, Harold
Location: A rundown row house in Newark, New Jersey
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Treat Supports the Household — Treat spends the day robbing people to provide for himself and his younger brother. Characters: Treat
Location: Newark streets
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Isolation Inside the House — The younger brother tries to educate himself with magazines and television while remaining at home. Characters: Treat
Location: The row house
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The Bar Encounter — Treat encounters Harold, a mysterious man carrying a briefcase. Characters: Treat, Harold
Location: A bar
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Stocks and Bonds — Harold's briefcase contains stocks and bonds, making him a target for Treat. Characters: Treat, Harold
Location: A bar
The Bar Kidnapping
Treat discovers Harold and his briefcase of stocks and bonds in a bar, then kidnaps him. The abduction brings a mysterious outsider into the brothers' home.
Key Events
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Stocks and Bonds — Harold's briefcase contains stocks and bonds, making him a target for Treat. Characters: Treat, Harold
Location: A bar
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Harold Is Abducted — Treat kidnaps Harold and takes him into the brothers' domestic world. Characters: Treat, Harold
Location: From the bar to the row house
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The Captive Reverses Control — Harold turns the situation around and begins to control the interaction. Characters: Treat, Harold
Location: The row house
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Harold Joins Household Life — Harold assimilates himself into the brothers' lives rather than remaining only a captive. Characters: Treat, Harold
Location: The row house
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Treat Encounters Refinement — Harold begins changing Treat's behavior and turns the violent pickpocket into a gentleman. Characters: Treat, Harold
Location: The row house
The Captive Takes Control
Harold reverses the power dynamic and assimilates into the household. He begins reforming Treat and changing the emotional balance of the home.
Key Events
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Treat Encounters Refinement — Harold begins changing Treat's behavior and turns the violent pickpocket into a gentleman. Characters: Treat, Harold
Location: The row house
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A New Domestic Balance — The household's relationships change as Harold becomes an active presence in the brothers' lives. Characters: Treat, Harold
Location: The row house
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Harold Encourages the Younger Brother — Harold gives the younger brother encouragement while he remains isolated inside the house. Characters: Harold
Location: The row house
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The Fear of Outside — It becomes clear that Treat has taught the younger brother to fear contact with the outside world. Characters: Treat, Harold
Location: The row house
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Agoraphobia Is Challenged — Harold helps the younger brother confront his severe agoraphobia. Characters: Harold
Location: The row house and outside threshold
Freedom Against Fear
Harold encourages the younger brother and challenges the severe agoraphobia maintained by Treat's warnings. The effort creates mounting tension within the household.
Key Events
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Agoraphobia Is Challenged — Harold helps the younger brother confront his severe agoraphobia. Characters: Harold
Location: The row house and outside threshold
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Household Tensions Rise — Harold's encouragement and Treat's controlling fears create increasing tension in the household. Characters: Treat, Harold
Location: The row house
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Harold's Disappearance Is Noticed — Other people have noticed that Harold has disappeared after being taken from the bar. Characters: Harold
Location: Outside the row house
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The Brothers Argue — An argument between the brothers intensifies the emotional crisis inside the house. Characters: Treat
Location: The row house
Death on the Couch
After an argument between the brothers, Harold returns fatally wounded. He dies on the couch, leaving Treat in tears and the younger brother offering comfort.
Key Events
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Harold Returns Wounded — Harold returns after the argument and is revealed to have suffered fatal wounds. Characters: Treat, Harold
Location: The row house
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Harold Dies on the Couch — Harold dies on the couch while the younger brother remains by his side. Characters: Harold
Location: The row house couch
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Treat Breaks Down — Treat breaks down in tears after Harold's death. Characters: Treat
Location: The row house couch
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Comfort After Loss — The younger brother comforts Treat as the household faces Harold's death. Characters: Treat
Location: The row house
Brothers Treat and Philip have only had each other since they were kids, when a small-time criminal abruptly upends their routine lives.