Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Return to an Unfamiliar City
After leaving prison, Al Kapone returns to a city changed by his absence. He learns his mother is dead and his former home is gone, while an old friend offers him shelter.
Key Events
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Card Trick on the Train — A traveler reads a young passenger's past and likely future through uncanny observation.
Location: Train
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Robbery Records Reviewed — An investigator reviews a theft gang's records and a robbery that ended in a guard's death.
Location: Investigator's office
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Al Kapone Leaves Prison — Al Kapone is released after serving time in prison. Characters: Al Kapone
Location: Prison
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A Changed City — Al Kapone returns to a city transformed during his years away. Characters: Al Kapone
Location: City
Searching for a New Life
Al Kapone tries to find honest work and reconnect with Metalac, where he once played football. His criminal record makes people wary, and familiar streets bring former companions back into his life.
Key Events
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News of His Mother — Al Kapone learns that his mother has died. Characters: Al Kapone
Location: City
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The Old Home Is Gone — He discovers that his old home has been replaced. Characters: Al Kapone
Location: Former home
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An Old Friend Offers Shelter — An old friend offers Al Kapone a place to stay. Characters: Al Kapone
Location: City
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Former Companions Reappear — Familiar streets bring Al Kapone face to face with former companions and crime. Characters: Al Kapone
Location: City streets
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Seeking Honest Work — Al Kapone tries to find honest work, but people are wary of his record. Characters: Al Kapone
Location: City
The Pull of Old Associates
Ajkula's gang needs Al Kapone's skills, and Bigi tries to recruit him for another robbery. Al Kapone refuses, saying he has spent enough time in prison and wants an ordinary life.
Key Events
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Return to Metalac — Al Kapone tries to return to the football club where he once played. Characters: Al Kapone
Location: Metalac
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Ajkula's Gang Seeks Him — Ajkula's gang wants Al Kapone's skills for a new robbery. Characters: Al Kapone
Location: City
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Bigi Presses His Offer — Bigi tries to recruit Al Kapone into the gang's plans. Characters: Al Kapone, Bigi invalid
Location: City
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Al Kapone Refuses Crime — He refuses the robbery, saying he wants to live like everyone else. Characters: Al Kapone
Location: City
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Encounters with Gordana — Encounters with Gordana make the passage of time and lost possibilities clear. Characters: Al Kapone, Gordana
Location: City
The Watch and the Unresolved Past
Al Kapone admits that he got drunk and stole a watch after his release, and he feels ashamed of the relapse. His old associates continue to tempt him, but he rejects their offers and ends with the stolen watch still in hand.
Key Events
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The Stolen Watch Confession — Al Kapone admits he got drunk and stole a watch after his release. Characters: Al Kapone
Location: City
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Shame over the Relapse — Al Kapone is ashamed that he slipped back into crime. Characters: Al Kapone
Location: City
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Offers of Money and Status — His former associates offer money, status, and an apartment to secure his help. Characters: Al Kapone, Bigi invalid
Location: City
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Refusing to Be Bought — Al Kapone rejects the offers and refuses to be bought or commanded. Characters: Al Kapone, Bigi invalid
Location: City
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The Watch Remains — Al Kapone is left holding the stolen watch and wondering where to hide it. Characters: Al Kapone
Location: City