Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Warning Too Late
As a boy, the young man warns a priest of danger, but the priest dismisses him and is killed. The boy is hidden in the vestry after the warning has failed.
Key Events
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The Boy Warns the Priest — As a boy, the young man warns a priest that someone is coming to hurt him.
Location: A church
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The Priest Is Killed — The priest dismisses the warning, and an attacker arrives and kills him.
Location: A church
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Hidden in the Vestry — The boy is hidden in the vestry, but his warning has come too late.
Location: The vestry
Visions Return
Years later, he lives quietly with his seriously ill mother and studies programming. A vivid murder vision returns, prompting him to contact the authorities and seek protection from Steve.
Key Events
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A Quiet Life with His Mother — Years later, the young man lives quietly with his seriously ill mother and studies programming.
Location: Home
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The Murder Vision Returns — He experiences a murder through a frighteningly clear vision and reports it to authorities.
Location: Unspecified
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A Killer May Be Active Again — He believes a killer who had been away for years has resumed murdering, but cannot identify him.
Location: Unspecified
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Steve Is Hired for Protection — Seeking protection, the young man hires the skeptical Steve as a bodyguard. Characters: Steve
Location: Unspecified
Power Under Scrutiny
He explains that his visions are fragmented glimpses across time. A public test and his claims about classified information and a submarine reactor draw official attention and suspicion.
Key Events
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Visions Across Time — He explains to Steve that his visions reveal disconnected details from past, present, and future. Characters: Steve
Location: Unspecified
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The Sealed Tube Test — He apparently bends a metal bar inside a sealed tube using only his mind.
Location: A public test
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Officials Secure the Evidence — Organizers secure the recording and equipment rather than let the result be shared freely.
Location: A public test
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Classified Access Raises Alarm — Officials see him as a national-security threat after he demonstrates access to classified information.
Location: Unspecified
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The Submarine Reactor Claim — He claims to have affected a submarine's reactor valve, intensifying official concern.
Location: Unspecified
A Conditional Release
He demands immunity for Steve and safe passage for both of them. Authorities agree to let them go once the submarine danger has passed, while the killer's murders continue.
Key Events
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Immunity and Safe Passage Demanded — He demands immunity for Steve and safe passage for both of them. Characters: Steve
Location: Unspecified
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Authorities Agree to Let Them Go — Authorities agree to let them go once the danger to the submarines has passed. Characters: Steve
Location: Unspecified
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The Killer Continues — The killer continues murdering people while the young man and Steve try to stop him.
Location: Unspecified
Captive and Betrayed
The young man is abducted, and Steve follows the trail as officials locate the captive. Senior officials secretly plan to let the kidnapper kill him, and the account ends before the confrontation or its outcome.
Key Events
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Abducted in a Van — The young man is abducted in a van, and Steve pursues the trail. Characters: Steve
Location: A van
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Officials Locate the Captive — Officials learn where the captive is being taken.
Location: Unspecified
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A Secret Elimination Plan — Senior officials decide to let the kidnapper kill him and frame the aftermath as a successful arrest.
Location: Unspecified
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The Threat Remains Unresolved — The account ends with the young man still in danger, before the planned confrontation or outcome is shown. Characters: Steve
Location: Unspecified