Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Drilling Bargain
Financial desperation places George under pressure to accept a natural gas company's offer. The drilling operation enters the land and worsens the feud between the two families.
Key Events
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Rural Pennsylvania Farms — Two farming families live on neighboring properties amid a longstanding feud.
Location: Rural Pennsylvania
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Families Face Hardship — Both families suffer financially, while George struggles to keep his repair business operating. Characters: George Lomack
Location: Lomack farm and auto repair business
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Fracking Offer Arrives — Natural gas representatives approach George about acquiring drilling rights on his land. Characters: George Lomack
Location: Lomack property
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George Accepts Drilling — George accepts the lucrative offer to support his family despite the consequences for the neighboring farm. Characters: George Lomack
Location: Lomack property
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Equipment Enters Farm — Industrial equipment arrives and drilling operations begin on the Lomack land. Characters: George Lomack
Location: Lomack property
Silence Over the Farms
Fracking disrupts both properties as an unexplained illness spreads among the families. Contaminated water and the disappearance of wildlife reveal that the danger is environmental as well as biological.
Key Events
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Equipment Enters Farm — Industrial equipment arrives and drilling operations begin on the Lomack land. Characters: George Lomack
Location: Lomack property
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Operations Disrupt Both Farms — The drilling operation disrupts daily life and further aggravates the feud between the families. Characters: George Lomack, Tom Dolan
Location: The two family farms
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The Scratching Illness Begins — Members of both families develop an illness that initially makes them obsessively scratch their skin.
Location: Both family homes
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Unsafe Water Is Suspected — A child refuses the tap water, while other family members continue drinking it.
Location: The family homes
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Wildlife Falls Silent — The conspicuous absence of wildlife sounds signals that the environment is being dangerously altered.
Location: The farms and surrounding woods
The Fungus Emerges
The cause of the illness is connected to fungus unearthed by drilling. A disappearance, a corpse fused to a tree, and Tom's exposure make the threat visibly monstrous.
Key Events
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The Unearthed Fungus — The illness is revealed to result from a fungus unearthed by fracking that poisons air and water.
Location: The drilling area
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A Matriarch Disappears — After a coughing fit in the barn, a family matriarch disappears and crawls into the woods.
Location: Dolan barn and woods
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Tom Finds the Corpse — Tom finds the missing woman dead and attached to a tree by fungal tendrils emerging from her body. Characters: Tom Dolan
Location: Woods beside a tree
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Fungal Sac Bursts — A sac on one tendril explodes and covers Tom with an infectious substance. Characters: Tom Dolan
Location: Woods beside a tree
Families Collapse
The infection destroys family members and turns survivors against one another. George's hallucinations and Tom's contamination push the crisis toward violent confrontation.
Key Events
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The Infant Dies — An infant is found dead in a crib, reduced to a gelatinous mass after the fungus digests the skin.
Location: Lomack home
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Gunfire Inside the Family — A fungus-infected family member shoots another family member while under the illness's influence.
Location: The family property
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Baseball Bat Attack — George is attacked, and another family member kills the attacker with a baseball bat. Characters: George Lomack
Location: Lomack property
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George Hallucinates Violence — George drives for help but hallucinates his own face and attacks the neighbor. Characters: George Lomack
Location: A neighbor's property
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Tom Returns Hallucinating — Tom returns while hallucinating, appearing to have fungal tendrils growing from his body. Characters: Tom Dolan
Location: Lomack kitchen
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Tom Is Shot — Tom is shot and killed after being perceived as carrying the same fungal growth as the dead matriarch. Characters: Tom Dolan
Location: Lomack kitchen
The Contaminated Harvest
The immediate violence subsides after a final escape through the woods and corn fields. The farm continues producing food, suggesting that the ecological threat has spread beyond the original families.
Key Events
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Escape Through the Woods — Two survivors reach a tree house, pass out, and experience further hallucinations.
Location: Tree house and surrounding woods
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Rifle Fired Into Woods — A hallucinating survivor fires a rifle into empty woods, drives into the corn, and becomes stuck.
Location: Corn fields and woods
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Farm Carries the Infection — The farm continues operating; its corn reaches a bayside city while drainage flows toward the ocean.
Location: The farm and downstream coast