Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Assault and Flight
Dawn arrives at Barry's home, attacks him, and escapes. Barry contacts John, while Dawn continues north with Steph and avoids involving the police.
Key Events
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Dawn Arrives at Barry's Home — On a cold night, Dawn arrives at Barry's home. Characters: Dawn, Barry
Location: Barry's home
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Tea and Questions — Barry offers Dawn tea and asks her about children. Characters: Dawn, Barry
Location: Barry's home
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Dawn Attacks Barry — Dawn violently attacks Barry and escapes. Characters: Dawn, Barry
Location: Barry's home
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Barry Contacts John — Barry contacts John, who is trying to locate Dawn; Barry insists that police stay uninvolved. Characters: Barry, John
Location: Unspecified
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Police Question Dawn — A police officer questions Dawn; she says she is heading north and continues on. Characters: Dawn
Location: Road
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Flight with Steph — Dawn continues her flight with Steph, a young girl in her care. Characters: Dawn, Steph
Location: Road
A Fragile Hiding Place
At a motel, Dawn keeps Steph close and admits she has hurt someone. She buys Steph clothes and a necklace, recalling the connection between her own mother's gift and Steph's father.
Key Events
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Flight with Steph — Dawn continues her flight with Steph, a young girl in her care. Characters: Dawn, Steph
Location: Road
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Keeping Steph Close — Dawn keeps Steph close and warns her not to wander off. Characters: Dawn, Steph
Location: Motel
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Dawn Admits the Assault — Dawn admits she has badly hurt someone while Steph struggles to understand why they are hiding. Characters: Dawn, Steph
Location: Motel
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Clothes and Necklace — Dawn buys Steph clothes and a necklace, recalling her own mother's similar gift. Characters: Dawn, Steph
Location: Shop
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The Necklace's Memory — Dawn recalls that her mother's necklace led her to Steph's father. Characters: Dawn
Location: Unspecified
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Search Closes In — As the search closes in, Dawn and Steph move between places and encounter people who might recognize them. Characters: Dawn, Steph
Location: Unspecified
The Search Tightens
Dawn and Steph move between places as the search closes in. Steph becomes increasingly confused, and Dawn admits she is unwell and has nowhere else to go.
Key Events
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Search Closes In — As the search closes in, Dawn and Steph move between places and encounter people who might recognize them. Characters: Dawn, Steph
Location: Unspecified
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Steph's Confusion Grows — Steph grows confused about how they arrived and why they are hiding. Characters: Dawn, Steph
Location: Unspecified
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Dawn Explains Her Situation — Dawn says she wants to keep them together but is unwell and has nowhere else to go. Characters: Dawn, Steph
Location: Unspecified
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Former Officer Confronts Dawn — A former police officer confronts Dawn. Characters: Dawn
Location: Unspecified
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Questions About the Car — A man searching for Dawn asks the shopkeeper about her car. Characters: Shop Keeper
Location: Shop
The Irreversible Loss
At a petrol station, Steph sees her father and runs toward the road. Dawn and a man search for her but cannot find her.
Key Events
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Steph Sees Her Father — Steph sees her father and runs toward the road, calling for him. Characters: Steph
Location: Petrol station
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Search for Steph — Dawn and a man desperately search for Steph but cannot find her. Characters: Dawn
Location: Unspecified
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Dawn Returns to John — In the aftermath, Dawn returns to John, who says he cannot manage alone. Characters: Dawn, John
Location: John's location
Guilt and Aftermath
Dawn returns to John, who tells her Barry will not press charges. As they prepare to bury Steph, Dawn blames herself, while John calls her death an accident.
Key Events
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Dawn Returns to John — In the aftermath, Dawn returns to John, who says he cannot manage alone. Characters: Dawn, John
Location: John's location
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Barry Will Not Press Charges — John says he will call Barry, who has agreed not to press charges for the assault. Characters: John, Barry
Location: Unspecified
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Preparing to Bury Steph — As they prepare to bury Steph, Dawn says she let her die and heard her; John calls it an accident. Characters: Dawn, John
Location: Unspecified