Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Burden of Judgment
Walter believes he has a divine responsibility to judge the dead. His rigid certainty is set against ordinary routines and memories of Jim.
Key Events
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Divine Judgment — Walter believes he can determine whether dead people deserve heaven or hell. Characters: Walter
Location: Walter's daily world
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Sacred Daily Duty — Walter treats his supposed divine responsibility with absolute seriousness. Characters: Walter
Location: City streets
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Ordinary Frictions — Walter struggles to balance spiritual duties with work, food, and transportation. Characters: Walter
Location: Work and public transportation
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Bus with Jim — Walter remembers Jim reassuring him that illness was nothing to fear. Characters: Walter, Jim
Location: City bus
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Jim's Death — Walter recalls judging Jim immediately after Jim's death. Characters: Walter, Jim
Location: Unspecified
A Vision With a History
Walter encounters Greg, whom others cannot see. Greg's apparent family and history make Walter question whether the vision is supernatural or pathological.
Key Events
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Hell for Jim — Walter realizes he sent Jim to hell. Characters: Walter, Jim
Location: Walter's memory
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Karen's Heartbreak — Walter connects Jim's judgment to the belief that Jim broke Karen's heart. Characters: Walter, Karen, Jim
Location: Walter's memory
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Greg Appears — Walter begins seeing Greg, whom other people cannot perceive. Characters: Walter, Greg
Location: City streets
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Greg's Interruption — Greg persistently tries to draw Walter away from his rigid duties. Characters: Walter, Greg
Location: City streets
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A Ghost's History — Greg appears to have a family and history, deepening Walter's uncertainty. Characters: Walter, Greg
Location: Unspecified
The Job Is Challenged
Walter seeks professional help, but Dr. Corman dismisses him as delusional. Greg then attacks the logic and sincerity of Walter's sacred mission.
Key Events
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Walter Denies Greg — Walter insists that Greg is not real despite Greg's apparent personal history. Characters: Walter, Greg
Location: Unspecified
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Seeking Therapy — Walter asks Dr. Corman for help stopping the visions of Greg. Characters: Walter, Dr. Corman
Location: Therapy office
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Corman's Dismissal — Dr. Corman calls Walter delusional and ends the session. Characters: Walter, Dr. Corman
Location: Therapy office
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Greg Questions Duty — Greg challenges the logic behind Walter's supposed divine job. Characters: Walter, Greg
Location: Unspecified
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Escape from Truth — Walter tries to escape while Greg accuses him of avoiding the truth. Characters: Walter, Greg
Location: Unspecified
Guilt Comes Due
Walter's distress over Allie and the church encounter intensifies his crisis. He returns to Karen and confesses his role in Jim's fate.
Key Events
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Failed Sacred Work — Greg insists that Walter has failed to perform the work he calls sacred. Characters: Walter, Greg
Location: Unspecified
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Allie's Aisle — Walter is distressed by the prospect of watching Allie walk down the aisle. Characters: Walter, Allie
Location: Wedding setting
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Church Encounter — Walter has an encounter involving Greg and a church. Characters: Walter, Greg
Location: Church
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Return to Karen — Walter returns to Karen after the encounter involving Greg and the church. Characters: Walter, Karen
Location: Karen's home
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Confession to Karen — Walter confesses that he sent Jim to hell and connects it to their lost happiness. Characters: Walter, Karen, Jim
Location: Karen's home
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Guilt and Grief — Walter faces the possibility that guilt and grief shaped his divine judgments. Characters: Walter, Karen, Jim
Location: Karen's home
A ticket-taker at the local cinema believes he is the son of God. He has agreed to decide the eternal fate of everyone he comes in to contact with.