Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Promise Behind the Technology
Stu's business success centers on the Menzie technology and a promise of wide distribution. A promised share of proceeds does not prevent ownership and business dealings from becoming contentious.
Key Events
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Menzie Technology's Promise — Stu's business success is built around technology intended for wide distribution. Characters: Stu Undercoffler
Location: Unspecified
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A Share of Proceeds Promised — The inventor's doctor and friend is promised a share of proceeds. Characters: Stu Undercoffler
Location: Unspecified
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Ownership Dispute Emerges — Marci tells Stu he does not own the technology he seeks to use. Characters: Stu Undercoffler, Marci Gippolin
Location: Unspecified
Ownership and a Stolen Prototype
Marci challenges Stu's claim to the technology while he pursues a company takeover. A prototype is stolen from a laboratory, and the pursuit does not proceed as expected.
Key Events
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Stu Pursues a Takeover — Stu pursues a takeover of Garvin McHulsey's company. Characters: Stu Undercoffler, Garvin McHulsey
Location: Unspecified
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Prototype Stolen — The prototype is stolen from a laboratory. Characters: Stu Undercoffler
Location: Laboratory
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Plans Fail to Work — Those pursuing the prototype cannot make their plans work as expected. Characters: Stu Undercoffler
Location: Unspecified
Business Consequences at Home
Stu's wife challenges his business obsession and says a man has died because of him. Stu later reports hearing voices and finding unexplained packages at home.
Key Events
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Personal Costs Surface — Stu's wife challenges his business obsession and says a man has died because of him. Characters: Stu Undercoffler
Location: Unspecified
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Stu Reports Disturbing Signs — Stu says he hears voices and finds unexplained packages at home. Characters: Stu Undercoffler
Location: Stu's home
The Confrontation and Its Revelations
Mark, Brett, Byron, and others confront Stu over the harm attributed to his company. Byron explains his investment and the absent distribution contract, while the group connects the inventor's death and Elle's persona to the stolen work.
Key Events
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Confrontation Over Company Damage — Mark, Brett, Byron, and others confront Stu over the damage caused by his company. Characters: Stu Undercoffler, Mark Minscourri, Brett, Byron Fresnel
Location: Unspecified
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Byron Explains His Investment — Byron says he invested his inheritance based on Stu's retail-distribution promise. Characters: Stu Undercoffler, Byron Fresnel
Location: Unspecified
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No Distribution Contract — Byron points out that Stu had no distribution contract. Characters: Stu Undercoffler, Byron Fresnel
Location: Unspecified
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Death Linked to Theft — The group links the inventor's death to the theft of the inventor's work. Characters: Stu Undercoffler, Mark Minscourri, Brett, Byron Fresnel
Location: Unspecified
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Elle's Persona Revealed — The group says the inventor's sister developed the persona Elle, resembling Stu's late wife. Characters: Danielle Menzie / Elle, Stu Undercoffler
Location: Unspecified
Release Without Resolution
Mark tells Stu they will let him go and urges him to change. The group indicates a further scheme involving Mark and Lita, but the scenes end before its outcome or Stu's fate is known.
Key Events
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Mark Offers Release — Mark says they will let Stu go and urges him to change his life. Characters: Stu Undercoffler, Mark Minscourri
Location: Unspecified
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Further Retaliation Unresolved — A further scheme involving Mark and Lita is indicated, but its outcome is not shown. Characters: Stu Undercoffler, Mark Minscourri, Lita Minscourri
Location: Unspecified