Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Family Left Behind
Helen's suicide leaves Ruth and Lucille dependent on extended family. The sisters grow up near the lake while learning about another family death connected to its waters.
Key Events
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Helen Leaves Her Daughters — Helen leaves Ruth and Lucille at their grandmother's home. Characters: Helen, Ruth, Lucille
Location: Sylvia's home
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Suicide at Lake Fingerbone — Helen drives her car off a cliff into the lake. Characters: Helen
Location: Lake Fingerbone
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Seven Years of Care — The sisters are raised there for seven years. Characters: Ruth, Lucille
Location: Sylvia's home
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New Relatives Arrive — Relatives from Spokane move in to care for the sisters. Characters: Ruth, Lucille
Location: Fingerbone
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The Grandfather's Death — The sisters learn their grandfather died in a train accident. Characters: Ruth, Lucille
Location: Lake Fingerbone
An Unstable Guardian
A drifting aunt takes over the household and introduces an unconventional life. Floodwater, truancy, and a growing hoard of garbage intensify the sisters' discomfort.
Key Events
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A Drifter Takes Over — Their drifter aunt takes responsibility for the teenage sisters. Characters: Ruth, Lucille
Location: Family home
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Flooded Household — The household continues despite floodwater covering the main floor. Characters: Ruth, Lucille
Location: Family home
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Trestle Sighting — The sisters see their aunt walking atop the trestle. Characters: Ruth, Lucille
Location: Trestle over Lake Fingerbone
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Garbage Fills the House — Newspapers and garbage accumulate throughout the house. Characters: Ruth, Lucille
Location: Family home
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Lucille's Household Argument — Lucille rejects the household's way of life after an argument. Characters: Ruth, Lucille
Location: Kitchen
Sisters Divided
Lucille rejects the household and eventually runs away to live with her schoolteacher. Ruth remains emotionally attached to the aunt and joins her increasingly strange excursions.
Key Events
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School Rebellion — Ruth and Lucille regularly skip school. Characters: Ruth, Lucille
Location: School
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Lucille Runs Away — Lucille leaves and moves in with her schoolteacher. Characters: Ruth, Lucille
Location: School
Lake and Railway Shadows
Ruth follows her aunt across the lake and beneath the trestle. Stories of invisible children and the submerged train deepen Ruth's separation from ordinary life.
Key Events
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Boat Taken from Fisherman — Ruth's aunt steals a fisherman's boat and rows away with her. Characters: Ruth
Location: Lake Fingerbone
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Abandoned Homestead — Ruth hears claims about invisible children in the surrounding woods. Characters: Ruth
Location: Abandoned homestead
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The Train Beneath the Lake — Ruth is told that the train carrying her father remains underwater. Characters: Ruth
Location: Under the trestle
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Riding the Passing Train — Ruth and her aunt climb onto a train and ride toward town. Characters: Ruth
Location: Trestle
Leaving Fingerbone
Authorities judge the household unsuitable, prompting frantic cleaning and a failed attempt to make Ruth conventional. Ruth and her aunt burn the house and leave Fingerbone by crossing the trestle.
Key Events
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Lucille Urges Escape — Lucille asks Ruth to leave the family home. Characters: Ruth, Lucille
Location: School
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Church Inspection — Church ladies inspect the house and reject the guardian's suitability. Characters: Ruth
Location: Family home
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Desperate House Cleaning — The house is cleaned, newspapers are burned, and breakfast is formalized. Characters: Ruth
Location: Family home
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Sheriff's Warning — A sheriff finds Ruth awake and warns that he will return. Characters: Ruth
Location: Family home
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House Fire — Ruth and her aunt set fire to the house, but neighbors interrupt. Characters: Ruth
Location: Family home
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Missed Train — They run toward a passing train but arrive too late. Characters: Ruth
Location: Railway near Fingerbone
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Crossing the Trestle — Ruth and her aunt walk across the trestle into the night. Characters: Ruth
Location: Trestle over Lake Fingerbone