Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Scavenged Christmas Gift
The nomad recovers robot parts and brings them into the junk trade. Mo obtains the head and gives it to Jill, while Lincoln secretly watches the couple.
Key Events
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Nomad Finds Buried Robot — A scavenger finds and collects a buried robot in the wasteland. Characters: Nomad
Location: Irradiated wasteland
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Robot Parts Reach Alvy's Shop — Mo buys the parts from the nomad and sells most of them to Alvy. Characters: Nomad, Moses "Hard Mo" Baxter, Alvy, Shades
Location: Alvy's junk shop
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Jill Receives the Robot Head — Mo gives Jill the robot head as a Christmas present. Characters: Moses "Hard Mo" Baxter, Jill, Shades
Location: Jill's apartment
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Lincoln Spies on the Couple — Lincoln secretly watches Mo and Jill through a telescope. Characters: Moses "Hard Mo" Baxter, Jill, Lincoln Wineberg Jr.
Location: Jill's apartment and Lincoln's neighboring apartment
A Deadly Discovery
Mo and Jill's disagreement exposes differences in their outlook. Alvy identifies the machine, but Mo finds him dead and learns both its capabilities and its vulnerability to humidity.
Key Events
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Mo and Jill Argue About Children — They argue over sterilization, having children, and Jill's commercial art. Characters: Moses "Hard Mo" Baxter, Jill
Location: Jill's apartment
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Alvy Identifies the Machine — Alvy tells Mo the machine is a M.A.R.K. 13 and has researched its functions. Characters: Moses "Hard Mo" Baxter, Alvy
Location: Alvy's junk shop
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Mo Finds Alvy Dead — Mo finds Alvy dead from cytotoxin and learns the machine can self-repair and is vulnerable to humidity. Characters: Moses "Hard Mo" Baxter, Alvy
Location: Alvy's junk shop
The Apartment Under Siege
The machine reassembles in Jill's apartment and attacks her. Lincoln is killed, and Jill uses the refrigerator to evade its infrared vision before Mo, Shades, and security arrive.
Key Events
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Machine Reassembles in Apartment — The machine rebuilds itself from Jill's sculptures and drains power from the apartment. Characters: Jill
Location: Jill's apartment
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Jill Traps the Attacking Machine — The machine attacks Jill, who traps it in a room after the doors lock. Characters: Jill
Location: Jill's apartment
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Lincoln Is Killed — Lincoln ignores Jill's warning and is killed when he tries to open her blinds. Characters: Jill, Lincoln Wineberg Jr.
Location: Jill's apartment
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Jill Uses the Refrigerator — Jill reasons that the refrigerator can hide her from infrared vision and damages the machine. Characters: Jill
Location: Jill's kitchen
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Security Team Opens Fire — Mo, Shades, and the apartment security team arrive and apparently destroy the machine. Characters: Jill, Moses "Hard Mo" Baxter, Shades
Location: Jill's apartment
The Shower's Final Current
The apparent victory fails when the machine attacks again and poisons Mo. Jill discovers how to exploit its weakness, and Shades helps her reach the shower that deactivates it; the broadcast then announces government approval.
Key Events
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Mo Is Fatally Poisoned — The machine drags Jill away, then injects Mo with toxin during their confrontation. Characters: Moses "Hard Mo" Baxter, Jill
Location: Jill's apartment
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Jill Short-Circuits the Machine — Jill lures the machine into the bathroom; Shades gives her time to turn on the shower, shorting it out. Characters: Jill, Shades
Location: Jill's apartment bathroom
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Government Approves Mass Production — A radio announces government approval as the nomad returns to the wasteland. Characters: Nomad
Location: Jill's apartment and irradiated wasteland