Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Trouble at the Diner
Annie and Mary Lou begin their workday with reckless driving and comic conflict with Sheriff Waters. The diner’s mortgage crisis establishes the urgent financial stakes.
Key Events
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Beer-Fueled Drive — Annie speeds toward work while drinking beer, with Mary Lou beside her. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mary Lou
Location: Road to the diner
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Sheriff Gives Chase — Sheriff Waters pursues Annie's speeding pickup toward the diner. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mary Lou, Sheriff Waters
Location: Road near the diner
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Banana Peel Fall — Waters enters the diner, slips on a banana peel, and falls before amused old-timers. Characters: Sheriff Waters, Hank, Luke
Location: Diner entrance
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Mortgage Debt Revealed — The diner faces foreclosure because the mortgage is 5,641 dollars and 87 cents behind. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mary Lou, Mr. Piker
Location: Diner
A Costly Proposal
Waters arrests Annie and Bobby Joe, then offers to pay the debt if Annie marries him. His lack of sufficient money forces Annie to seek another solution.
Key Events
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Nude Swimming Arrest — Waters arrests Annie and Bobby Joe for nude swimming. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Bobby Joe, Sheriff Waters
Location: Swimming area
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Annie Is Released — Sheriff Waters releases Annie and presents himself as a possible financial solution. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Sheriff Waters
Location: Sheriff's jurisdiction
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Conditional Marriage Offer — Waters offers to pay the debt if Annie will marry him. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Sheriff Waters
Location: Sheriff Waters' office
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Waters Lacks Funds — Annie discovers Waters has only a few hundred dollars and plans to collect the rest from parking tickets. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Sheriff Waters
Location: Sheriff Waters' office
Miami's False Promises
Annie and Mary Lou travel to Miami and consult Flora. Suggestions involving wealthy partners lead to bizarre encounters, deception, and repeated disappointment.
Key Events
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Journey to Miami — Annie and Mary Lou leave Titwillow to seek financial help from Flora in Miami. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mary Lou
Location: Road to Miami
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Flora's Apartment — Annie asks her sister Flora for help with the mortgage money. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mary Lou, Flora
Location: Flora's Miami apartment
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Flora's Financial Reality — Flora's inadequate earnings appear connected to men paying for sexual entertainment. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mary Lou, Flora
Location: Flora's Miami apartment
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Sugar Daddy Suggestion — Flora suggests that Annie find a wealthy partner to fund her needs. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mary Lou, Flora
Location: Flora's Miami apartment
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Napoleon Complex Suitor — A wealthy Frenchman appears with a uniform, sword, and wooden horse head, undermining Annie's hopes. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mary Lou
Location: Miami social setting
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City Slicker Betrayal — A confidence trickster takes Annie's remaining money after an intimate encounter and leaves a City Slicker note. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mary Lou
Location: Miami lodging
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Possessive Wife Appears — Another wealthy prospect is blocked when his violently possessive wife confronts him with a shotgun. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mary Lou, Edna Whittlestone
Location: Miami social setting
Foreclosure at the Door
The discouraged women return to Titwillow just as Waters and Piker arrive to finalize the foreclosure. The diner appears moments away from being lost.
Key Events
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Disillusioned Return — Discouraged and disillusioned, Annie and Mary Lou return to the diner. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mary Lou
Location: Road back to Titwillow
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Foreclosure Arrives — Waters and Piker arrive at the diner to finalize the foreclosure. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mary Lou, Sheriff Waters, Mr. Piker
Location: Diner
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Necklace Valuation — Mr. Bates examines Annie's necklace and offers 7,000 dollars for it. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mr. Bates
Location: Diner
The Necklace Solution
Mr. Bates values Annie's necklace at 7,000 dollars, creating a last-minute financial solution. The ending returns to comic humiliation as Waters leaves with milk and pie on him.
Key Events
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Necklace Valuation — Mr. Bates examines Annie's necklace and offers 7,000 dollars for it. Characters: Sixpack Annie Bodine, Mr. Bates
Location: Diner
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Milk-Filled Hat — Mary Lou pours milk into Waters' hat, which he puts on while leaving. Characters: Mary Lou, Sheriff Waters
Location: Diner
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Pie-Faced Departure — Waters bumps into a baker carrying cream pies, leaving one smeared across his face. Characters: Sheriff Waters
Location: Diner exit