Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Devil's Offer
Stanley struggles with shyness and despair before George interrupts his suicide attempt. George proves his identity through the melted ice lolly and offers a soul-for-wishes bargain.
Key Events
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Stanley Meets Margaret — Shy cook Stanley is infatuated with waitress Margaret but cannot approach her. Characters: Stanley Moon, Margaret
Location: Wimpy restaurant in London
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Interrupted Suicide Attempt — Stanley attempts suicide by hanging before George interrupts him. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot
Location: Stanley's London setting
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The Seven Wishes Offer — George claims to be the Devil and offers seven wishes for Stanley's soul. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot
Location: Stanley's London setting
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Trial Wish Confirmed — George fulfills Stanley's trial wish, but the melted lolly convinces Stanley he is the Devil. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot
Location: Nearby shop
Wishes Turn Sour
Stanley uses wishes to become articulate, wealthy, and famous in order to win Margaret. George twists every desire until Stanley suffers humiliation and rejection.
Key Events
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George Explains His Quota — George explains his contest to collect 100 billion souls and regain Heaven. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot
Location: London
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The Articulate Wish — Stanley becomes a talkative intellectual, while Margaret adopts his pretentious beliefs. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot, Margaret
Location: Wimpy restaurant
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The Failed Advance — Stanley's attempt to advance the relationship ends with Margaret screaming for help. Characters: Stanley Moon, Margaret
Location: Wimpy restaurant
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Millionaire Fantasy — Stanley becomes a multimillionaire with Margaret as his wife, but she ignores him and his gifts. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot, Margaret
Location: Lavish home
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The Pop Singer Wish — Stanley becomes a successful pop singer before another act eclipses him. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot, Margaret
Location: Music performance setting
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Groupies Abandon Stanley — A monotonous hit hypnotizes Margaret and the groupies into leaving Stanley. Characters: Stanley Moon, Margaret
Location: Music performance setting
Impossible Fantasies
Further wishes place Stanley and Margaret in a morgue and a countryside household. Each imagined relationship becomes more painful as Stanley discovers that desire cannot control another person.
Key Events
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Flies In The Morgue — A passing wish turns Stanley and George into flies on a morgue wall. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot, Margaret
Location: Morgue
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Morgue Attack — Stanley attacks after Margaret is invited to a vice squad party, but bug spray defeats him. Characters: Stanley Moon, Margaret
Location: Morgue
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Countryside Family Wish — Stanley wishes for a quiet countryside life with Margaret and children, but she becomes another man's wife. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot, Margaret
Location: Countryside home
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Painful Romantic Attempt — Although they are deeply in love, Stanley and Margaret's attempt at intimacy causes emotional agony. Characters: Stanley Moon, Margaret
Location: Countryside home
The Unbreakable Wish
Stanley tries to formulate a wish George cannot corrupt, but the result turns both lovers into nuns. His failed escape exposes the limits of the wish bargain.
Key Events
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The Perfect Wish — Stanley wishes for permanent mutual love away from other men, but George makes them both nuns. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot, Margaret
Location: Order of Saint Beryl
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The Nun Escape Fails — Stanley blows a raspberry to undo the wish, but the attempt has no effect. Characters: Stanley Moon, Margaret
Location: Order of Saint Beryl
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Seventh Wish Revelation — George reveals that the trial wish for the ice lolly already used Stanley's seventh wish. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot
Location: London
Freedom Without Magic
George reveals that the trial wish consumed Stanley's final wish, then spares him after exceeding his quota. Stanley burns the contract and chooses to approach Margaret without supernatural assistance.
Key Events
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George Spares Stanley — After exceeding his quota, George spares Stanley eternal damnation and returns his soul. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot
Location: London
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Contract Burns — George reaches Stanley too late, and Stanley burns the contract before it can be reclaimed. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot
Location: London
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A Real Invitation — Stanley asks Margaret out honestly, while George leaves after threatening revenge through modern technology. Characters: Stanley Moon, George Spiggot, Margaret
Location: Wimpy restaurant