Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Grief Opens The Door
James lives with Bryony after his father's death, while Lisa supports the grieving household. Dangerous incidents and unexplained object movements begin to surround him.
Key Events
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A Family After Loss — James lives with Bryony while Lisa provides support after the death of James's father. Characters: James, Bryony, Lisa
Location: Family home
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The Outdoor Tap Incident — James turns on an outdoor tap beside electrical equipment, creating a serious electrocution risk. Characters: James
Location: Outside the family home
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Objects Move Alone — Marbles and cutlery appear to move without an obvious physical cause. Characters: James, Bryony
Location: Family home
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James Sees His Father — James insists that he has seen his dead father, but Bryony says this is impossible. Characters: James, Bryony
Location: Family home
Fear Takes Shape
James speaks about his dead father and introduces soldiers, killing, and explosives into his play. Bryony and Lisa struggle to understand whether the disturbances come from James or something beyond him.
Key Events
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Soldiers In His Play — James's conversations and play include soldiers, killing, and explosives. Characters: James
Location: Family home
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Bryony's Exhaustion — Bryony struggles with grief and exhaustion while Lisa helps maintain the household. Characters: Bryony, James, Lisa
Location: Family home
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Preparing The House — Bryony and Lisa prepare the house after discovering increasingly alarming behavior. Characters: Bryony, Lisa, James
Location: Family home
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The Emotional Explanation — Lisa suggests that powerful emotions might be producing the physical disturbances. Characters: Lisa, Bryony
Location: Family home
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Bryony Rejects Blame — Bryony resists the idea that James is unconsciously causing the disturbances. Characters: Bryony, Lisa
Location: Family home
The Locked House
James becomes increasingly frightened and seeks Lisa's protection. After he disappears from the locked house, Bryony's fear of judgment prevents her from calling the police.
Key Events
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Bryony Rejects Blame — Bryony resists the idea that James is unconsciously causing the disturbances. Characters: Bryony, Lisa
Location: Family home
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James Fears The Night — James becomes frightened and begs to sleep with Lisa. Characters: James, Lisa, Bryony
Location: Family home
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Confronting Fear — Lisa encourages James to confront the fears surrounding the unexplained events. Characters: Lisa, James
Location: Family home
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The Locked House Escape — James disappears despite the house being locked, deepening the family's fear. Characters: James, Bryony, Lisa
Location: Family home
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Bryony Refuses Police — Bryony refuses to call the police because she fears being judged incapable of caring for James. Characters: Bryony, Lisa
Location: Family home
Proof Beyond Reason
James is found hearing voices and explains that previous disturbances were not his fault. His apparent ability to move objects convinces Lisa that the situation may be supernatural or otherwise extraordinary.
Key Events
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James Is Found — James is found terrified and reports hearing voices inside his head. Characters: James, Bryony, Lisa
Location: Family home
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The Bookcase Memory — James says that earlier disturbances, including a moving bookcase, happened before but were not caused by him. Characters: James, Bryony, Lisa
Location: Family home
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Bryony Believes James — Bryony apologizes for doubting James and promises that nothing will hurt him. Characters: Bryony, James
Location: Family home
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The Mind Moving Demonstration — James apparently moves an object with his mind, convincing Lisa that something extraordinary may be happening. Characters: James, Lisa, Bryony
Location: Family home
Steve's Ominous Claim
Bryony uses a Ouija board to contact Steve despite Lisa's warning. Steve then demands James and ends with him in an unresolved situation where James appears to be under Steve's control.
Key Events
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The Ouija Decision — Bryony decides to use a Ouija board to contact Steve, while Lisa warns that it is dangerous. Characters: Bryony, Lisa
Location: Family home
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Steve Demands James — Steve angrily demands to know where James is and accuses Bryony of taking him. Characters: Steve, Bryony
Location: Family home
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Steve Takes Control — James eats pizza with Steve, receives a strange drink, and is told he will stay with him. Characters: James, Steve
Location: Unspecified location
After the tragic death of her husband, a soldier posted to Afghanistan, Bryony tries to build a new life for herself and her young son, James. Struggling with her own grief she fails to notice that James has become secretive and withdrawn, spending hours alone playing out death scenes with his toys. When things start to go missing and furniture is smashed Bryony blames James but when she confronts him she finds herself facing a reality more terrifying than any nightmare. As her world crashes around her Bryony realises that unless she can find a way to reconnect with her son she and James will be separated for ever.