Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Letters Behind the Murders
The killings begin in Vallejo and continue at Lake Berryessa. Encrypted letters draw the newspaper into the killer's campaign and awaken Graysmith's interest.
Key Events
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Vallejo Lovers' Lane Attack — An unknown attacker shoots Darlene Ferrin and Mike Mageau; only Mageau survives. Characters: Darlene Ferrin
Location: Vallejo, California
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Encrypted Letters Arrive — The newspaper receives letters from the killer demanding publication of a coded message. Characters: Paul Avery, Robert Graysmith
Location: San Francisco Chronicle newsroom
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Graysmith Studies the Cipher — Graysmith correctly suspects that the cipher does not contain the killer's identity. Characters: Robert Graysmith
Location: San Francisco Chronicle newsroom
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Cipher Is Decoded — A married couple deciphers a letter, confirming that it does not reveal the killer's name. Characters: Paul Avery, Robert Graysmith
Location: San Francisco
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Lake Berryessa Stabbing — The killer stabs Hartnell and another victim; the other victim dies two days later. Characters: Bryan Hartnell
Location: Lake Berryessa, Napa County
A Case Gains a Face
The Presidio Heights murder intensifies the investigation, while bloodstained evidence and taunting communications increase public fear. Graysmith's interpretations earn Avery's attention.
Key Events
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Lake Berryessa Stabbing — The killer stabs Hartnell and another victim; the other victim dies two days later. Characters: Bryan Hartnell
Location: Lake Berryessa, Napa County
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Film Reference Identified — Graysmith connects the phrase about dangerous animals to The Most Dangerous Game. Characters: Robert Graysmith, Paul Avery
Location: San Francisco Chronicle newsroom
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Presidio Heights Murder — A taxi driver is shot and killed in Presidio Heights. Characters: Cabbie / Paul Stine
Location: Presidio Heights, San Francisco
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Bloodstained Shirt Mailed — The newspaper receives pieces of the victim's shirt with another threatening letter. Characters: Paul Avery
Location: San Francisco Chronicle newsroom
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Regional Investigation Expands — Investigators from multiple jurisdictions coordinate their work on the murders. Characters: Jack Mulanax, Ken Narlow
Location: Northern California
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Television Threat Call — A caller claiming to be the killer speaks with Belli during a televised program. Characters: Melvin Belli
Location: KGO-TV morning talk show
The Suspect Under Doubt
Regional investigators question Allen after noticing a suggestive wristwatch. Handwriting evidence undermines the suspicion, while Avery suffers psychologically from a death threat.
Key Events
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Allen Is Questioned — Investigators question Allen and notice his wristwatch bears the killer's symbol. Characters: Jack Mulanax, Arthur Leigh Allen
Location: Vallejo
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Handwriting Evidence Conflicts — A handwriting expert says Allen did not write the letters despite his reported ambidexterity. Characters: Arthur Leigh Allen
Location: Police investigation
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Avery Receives Death Threat — Avery receives a threatening letter and becomes increasingly paranoid. Characters: Paul Avery
Location: Sacramento Bee
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Avery Turns to Substance Abuse — Fear and pressure drive Avery toward drugs and alcohol. Characters: Paul Avery
Location: Sacramento
Obsession Without Proof
Graysmith pursues the case despite restricted evidence access and growing personal costs. His investigation contributes to the collapse of his career and marriage.
Key Events
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Graysmith Presses the Case — Graysmith repeatedly contacts investigators and impresses them with his case knowledge. Characters: Robert Graysmith
Location: San Francisco
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Police Access Is Restricted — Graysmith cannot receive direct evidence access but obtains names for other departments. Characters: Robert Graysmith, Jack Mulanax
Location: San Francisco
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Graysmith Loses His Job — Graysmith's obsession costs him his job, and Melanie leaves with their children. Characters: Robert Graysmith, Melanie
Location: San Francisco
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Allen's Circumstantial Links — Graysmith links Allen's proximity and birthday to clues associated with the murders. Characters: Robert Graysmith, Arthur Leigh Allen, Darlene Ferrin
Location: Vallejo
An Open Ending
Graysmith confronts Allen and later receives an identification from the surviving victim. The DNA result remains inconclusive, leaving Allen as the prime suspect while the case stays open.
Key Events
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Hardware Store Encounter — Graysmith tracks Allen to his workplace; they silently stare at each other. Characters: Robert Graysmith, Arthur Leigh Allen
Location: Vallejo Ace Hardware
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Mageau Identifies Allen — Years later, Mike Mageau identifies Allen from a police mugshot. Characters: Arthur Leigh Allen
Location: Police identification procedure
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Case Remains Open — Allen dies before questioning; DNA does not match, but the case remains open. Characters: Robert Graysmith, Arthur Leigh Allen
Location: Northern California