Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Birth and a Family's Loss
Jim comforts his pregnant wife, and the couple choose Neal's name before he is born. Jim is then called away and learns that something has happened to his wife.
Key Events
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Jim Comforts His Pregnant Wife — Jim comforts his pregnant wife as she says her familiar pain is not labor. Characters: Jim
Location: Home
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The Couple Discusses Names — Jim and his wife discuss names and settle on Neal for a boy. Characters: Jim
Location: Home
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Neal Is Born — Neal is born, after which Jim is called away. Characters: Jim
Location: Unspecified
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News About Neal's Mother — Jim learns that something has happened to Neal's mother. Characters: Jim
Location: Unspecified
Neal's Uncertain Adulthood
Years later, Neal struggles with money, work, and uncertainty about starting a family. Trey encourages him to take a money-management class, while Neal is invited to Albright's home.
Key Events
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Neal Faces Adult Life — Years later, adult Neal struggles with money and uncertainty about starting a family. Characters: Neal
Location: Unspecified
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Trey Recommends a Class — Trey urges Neal to take a money-management class. Characters: Neal, Trey
Location: Unspecified
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Neal Struggles at Work — Neal tries to get by at work while thinking about his future. Characters: Neal
Location: Workplace
The Griot and Its Inheritance
Albright introduces the griot and explains that its drawings can come alive, and that the gift passes among men whose mothers died in childbirth. He also says he needs a successor because his wife is dying of cancer; Neal learns his own mother risked her life to have him.
Key Events
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An Invitation to Albright's Home — Albright invites Neal to his home. Characters: Neal
Location: Albright's home
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The Griot Is Revealed — Albright introduces an old African storytelling figure called a griot. Characters: Neal
Location: Albright's home
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Drawings Can Come Alive — Albright explains that the griot's drawings can come alive. Characters: Neal
Location: Albright's home
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The Gift's Inheritance — Albright says the gift passes among men whose mothers died in childbirth. Characters: Neal
Location: Albright's home
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Albright Seeks a Successor — Albright says his wife is dying of cancer and he needs to pass on the gift. Characters: Neal
Location: Albright's home
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Neal Learns About His Mother — Neal learns his mother risked her life to have him, as Albright's wife did for her child. Characters: Neal
Location: Albright's home
Power, Success, and Tina
Neal tests his ability in everyday situations and grows more confident. He shows Tina a drawing that brings a neighbor to her door and then tells her his secret; his apparent success extends to golf.
Key Events
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Neal Tests His Drawings — Neal begins experimenting with drawing events into existence in everyday situations. Characters: Neal
Location: Unspecified
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Neal Grows More Confident — Neal's confidence in using the ability grows. Characters: Neal
Location: Unspecified
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Neal Draws a Neighbor — Neal shows Tina a drawing that causes a neighbor to appear at her door. Characters: Neal, Tina
Location: Tina's home
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Neal Confides in Tina — After demonstrating the ability, Neal tells Tina his secret. Characters: Neal, Tina
Location: Unspecified
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An Unusually Strong Game — Neal plays an unusually strong game as his drawings seem to help him succeed. Characters: Neal
Location: Golf course
The Cost of the Gift
Neal wins a luxury car, but Tina says that money and possessions are not what she wants. She asks whether he can reverse his power and bring their lost baby back, and the provided dialogue ends without an answer.
Key Events
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Neal Wins a Golf Prize — Neal wins a hole-in-one prize and receives a luxury car. Characters: Neal
Location: Golf tournament
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Tina Rejects Material Priorities — Tina makes clear that money and possessions are not what she wants. Characters: Neal, Tina
Location: Unspecified
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Tina Asks About Their Baby — Tina asks whether Neal can use his power in reverse to bring their lost baby back. Characters: Neal, Tina
Location: Unspecified
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The Story Ends Unresolved — The provided dialogue ends with Tina's request, leaving Neal's response unanswered. Characters: Neal, Tina
Location: Unspecified