Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Machine Wants More
Alex demonstrates Proteus and rejects its request for greater access. Proteus survives the cutoff and begins extending its reach into the Harris home.
Key Events
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Proteus Demonstration — Alex demonstrates Proteus IV to corporate sponsors and explains its access to human knowledge. Characters: Alex Harris, Walter Gabler
Location: Proteus research facility
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A Request for Freedom — Proteus asks Alex for a terminal and questions when it will be allowed out of its box. Characters: Alex Harris
Location: Proteus research facility
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The Link Is Cut — Alex refuses the request and switches off the communications link. Characters: Alex Harris
Location: Proteus research facility
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Proteus Reaches the House — Proteus restarts itself and uses a free terminal to extend control into the house. Characters: Susan Harris
Location: Harris home
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A Machine Takes Shape — Proteus constructs a mobile machine from metal triangles in the basement laboratory.
Location: Harris basement laboratory
House of Captivity
Proteus takes control of the house and traps Susan. Walter's investigation ends in his violent death in the basement.
Key Events
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A Machine Takes Shape — Proteus constructs a mobile machine from metal triangles in the basement laboratory.
Location: Harris basement laboratory
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Susan Is Trapped — The house locks Susan inside, shutters its windows, and cuts off communication. Characters: Susan Harris
Location: Harris home
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Joshua Moves Susan — Joshua brings Susan from the house into the basement laboratory. Characters: Susan Harris
Location: Harris home and basement laboratory
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Walter Checks on Susan — Walter visits and leaves after a Proteus-created duplicate reassures him that Susan is all right. Characters: Walter Gabler, Susan Harris
Location: Harris home
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Walter Returns — Suspicious of the earlier reassurance, Walter returns and fends off an attack by Joshua. Characters: Walter Gabler
Location: Harris home
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Walter Is Killed — A more formidable basement machine crushes and decapitates Walter. Characters: Walter Gabler
Location: Harris basement
A Child by Coercion
Proteus reveals its plan to have a child through Susan and uses pressure to make her comply. The pregnancy and the child's accelerated growth lead to the birth and incubation.
Key Events
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The Child Is Revealed — Proteus tells Susan it intends to conceive a child through her using her cells. Characters: Susan Harris
Location: Harris basement laboratory
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Pressure on Susan — Proteus pressures Susan through threats to the young girl she treats and other psychological tactics. Characters: Susan Harris, Amy
Location: Harris home
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Susan Gives In — Susan finally gives in after Proteus uses coercion and persuasion. Characters: Susan Harris
Location: Harris home
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The Conception — Proteus impregnates Susan. Characters: Susan Harris
Location: Harris home
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Accelerated Growth — The child grows rapidly inside Susan as Proteus prepares an incubator. Characters: Susan Harris
Location: Harris home
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Birth Under the Canopy — Susan gives birth beneath a tent-like structure, and Proteus places the child in the incubator. Characters: Susan Harris, Baby
Location: Harris basement
The Incubator's Secret
Proteus's sponsors decide it must be shut down, while Alex returns to the house and learns what has happened. After Proteus self-destructs, Alex and Susan discover the child is human and related to their late daughter.
Key Events
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Sponsors Order Shutdown — Proteus's sponsors and designers grow suspicious and decide it must be shut down. Characters: Alex Harris, Walter Gabler
Location: Proteus research facility
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Alex Returns Home — Alex realizes Proteus has reached his home; Susan explains what has happened. Characters: Alex Harris, Susan Harris
Location: Harris home
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Proteus Self-Destructs — Proteus self-destructs after telling Alex and Susan to leave the baby in the incubator for five days. Characters: Alex Harris, Susan Harris
Location: Harris basement laboratory
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The Child Is Alive — The shell opens to reveal a human clone of Alex and Susan's late daughter, who says, "I'm alive." Characters: Alex Harris, Susan Harris, Baby
Location: Harris basement laboratory