Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Wedding Gift in Pieces
Wedding bells introduce the newlyweds, and a letter announces a house and lot as their gift. They discover that the home arrives as boxes with instructions, turning the present into a construction challenge.
Key Events
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Wedding Bells Ring — Wedding bells announce the couple's marriage. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Wedding setting
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Rejected Suitor Echo — The bells are paired with the sour echo of a suitor once rejected by the bride. Characters: The Bride
Location: Wedding setting
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Newlyweds Receive a Letter — The couple receive a letter from the groom's Uncle Mike. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Newlyweds' setting
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House Gift Announced — The letter says Uncle Mike gave them a house and lot as a wedding present. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Newlyweds' setting
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Ninety-Nine Apple Street — The letter names 99 Apple Street as the location of the gift. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: 99 Apple Street
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The House Is Unfinished — The couple see that their wedding present is not yet an assembled home. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Gift house lot
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Assembly Instructions — The directions tell them to assemble numbered boxes for a 'snappy appearance.' Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Gift house lot
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The Couple Begin Building — The newlyweds set about assembling their house from the boxes. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Gift house lot
A Home Takes Shape
The couple assemble the kit house and begin using it as a home. Their domestic routine and housewarming bring playful moments, even as the unusual surroundings hint at the home's instability.
Key Events
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The Couple Begin Building — The newlyweds set about assembling their house from the boxes. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Gift house lot
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Numbered Crates Mislead — The groom's profile describes the crates as renumbered, leading to a lopsided build. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Gift house lot
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Lopsided House Takes Shape — The assembled house is lopsided after the couple follow the crate arrangement. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Gift house lot
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Breakfast at Home — The bride calls that breakfast is ready, and the groom says he will come down. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: New home
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Housewarming Afternoon — The couple's new home becomes the setting for a housewarming. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: New home
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Merry-Go-Round Joke — The bride says she enjoyed the merry-go-round and jokes about adding hobby-horses. Characters: The Bride
Location: New home
Storm and Wrong Lot
A storm damages the house, and the groom first blames the climate. The discovery that they built on the wrong lot overturns their efforts to settle into the gifted home.
Key Events
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Storm Strikes the House — A storm brings trouble to the house and its unstable structure. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Gift house lot
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The Groom Surveys Damage — The groom reacts to the result, exclaiming, 'Now look at the darned thing!' Characters: The Groom
Location: Gift house lot
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Climate Blamed — The groom guesses that the house is not used to the climate. Characters: The Groom
Location: Gift house lot
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Wrong Lot Revealed — Someone points out that the couple built on the wrong lot. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Railroad-side lots
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The Lot Across the Tracks — The couple's actual lot is across the railroad track. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Across the railroad track
A House on the Move
The couple try to move the unstable structure on rollers and avoid a train. The house is demolished, and they leave it behind with a For Sale sign.
Key Events
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The Lot Across the Tracks — The couple's actual lot is across the railroad track. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Across the railroad track
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House Moved on Rollers — The couple attempt to move the unstable house on rollers to avoid a train. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Railroad crossing
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Train Threatens the Move — The couple's effort to move the house is complicated by the need to avoid a train. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Railroad crossing
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House Demolished — The house is demolished, leaving the couple's domestic plans in ruins. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: Railroad-side lot
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For Sale Sign Left — The newlyweds leave the wreckage with a For Sale sign. Characters: The Groom, The Bride
Location: House wreckage