Plot Analysis Summary
Gilby confronts his avoidance of adulthood and searches for identity through relationships, work, and an ultimately false paternal revelation.
Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Comfort Against Ambition
Gilby describes abandoned ambitions and defends a low-stress life centered on an easy store job. Sharon challenges his refusal to pursue a career or build a shared life.
Key Events
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Imagined Futures — Gilby recalls imagining lives as an astronaut or photographer but lacking confidence and talent. Characters: Gilby Smalls
Location: Unspecified
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Resisting Career Definitions — Gilby rejects the idea that a person's value should be defined by occupation. Characters: Gilby Smalls
Location: Unspecified
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Comfortable Store Job — Gilby works at an unpleasant but easy store job that helps him avoid stress. Characters: Gilby Smalls
Location: Cell phone store
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Sharon Demands Change — Sharon challenges Gilby's refusal to build a career or live with her. Characters: Gilby Smalls, Sharon
Location: Unspecified
The Cost of Avoidance
Sharon tells Gilby she has grown beyond him, and the relationship ends. Gilby moves in with May, whose conversations expose his unease about adulthood and responsibility.
Key Events
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The Relationship Ends — Sharon says she has grown beyond Gilby, and their conflict ends the relationship. Characters: Gilby Smalls, Sharon
Location: Unspecified
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Staying with May — Gilby stays with his mother while work is being done on his apartment. Characters: Gilby Smalls, May
Location: May's home
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Tense Home Conversations — Conversations with May reveal Gilby's discomfort with responsibility, health, and adulthood. Characters: Gilby Smalls, May
Location: May's home
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Exploring Work Connections — Gilby explores possible work and social connections, including a psychology-related project. Characters: Gilby Smalls
Location: Unspecified
Searching for Identity
Gilby considers work and social opportunities and hears that his lack of a male role model may have affected his identity. He admits that Han Solo was an ideal rather than a real figure in his life.
Key Events
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A Missing Role Model — A woman suggests Gilby's lack of a male role model may have affected his identity. Characters: Gilby Smalls
Location: Unspecified
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Han Solo as an Ideal — Gilby says he looked up to Han Solo but had no real male figure in his life. Characters: Gilby Smalls
Location: Unspecified
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Meeting Sharon Again — Gilby meets Sharon again after hearing that her life and career are going well. Characters: Gilby Smalls, Sharon
Location: Unspecified
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Parting with Mutual Apologies — They apologize and agree that ending their stagnant relationship was probably right, though Gilby still misses her. Characters: Gilby Smalls, Sharon
Location: Unspecified
A False Family Revelation
Gilby and Sharon meet again, apologize, and accept that their breakup was probably right. Gilby's attempt to claim a father is undone by a date discrepancy, prompting an angry confrontation with May.
Key Events
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Parting with Mutual Apologies — They apologize and agree that ending their stagnant relationship was probably right, though Gilby still misses her. Characters: Gilby Smalls, Sharon
Location: Unspecified
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Claiming a Father — After learning something from May, Gilby tells a man that he is his son. Characters: Gilby Smalls
Location: Unspecified
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The Dates Do Not Match — The man's initial welcome collapses when he explains that his Vietnam service in 1969 makes fatherhood impossible. Characters: Gilby Smalls
Location: Unspecified
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Confronting May — Gilby accuses May of creating a false father and leaving him with expensive therapy; May invokes Dumbo's magic feather. Characters: Gilby Smalls, May
Location: Unspecified