Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Death Remembered
Alice's funeral brings the young group together after her suicide. Bernard's past affair with Alice becomes the basis for their accusation and desire for revenge.
Key Events
-
Revenge Against Bernard — A young vigilante group seeks revenge for a sexual betrayal. Characters: Bernard, Natalie, Cate, Nick, Anthony
Location: Bernard's isolated bushland home
-
Alice's Funeral — The group attends Alice's funeral before pursuing Bernard. Characters: Alice, Cate, Natalie, Nick, Anthony
Location: Funeral location
-
Alice's Death — Alice took her own life three years after the affair. Characters: Alice, Cate, Natalie, Nick, Bernard
Location: Narrative backstory
-
The Past Affair — Bernard had an affair with Alice when she was sixteen. Characters: Alice, Bernard
Location: Narrative backstory
-
Bernard Becomes Blamed — The group holds Bernard responsible for Alice's death. Characters: Bernard, Cate, Natalie, Nick, Anthony
Location: Narrative backstory
The Revenge Scheme
The group commits to attacking Bernard. Natalie persuades Anthony to steal sleeping pills so the killing can be presented as a suicide.
Key Events
-
The Revenge Decision — The friends commit themselves to seeking revenge. Characters: Cate, Natalie, Nick, Anthony
Location: After Alice's funeral
-
Natalie Persuades Anthony — Natalie persuades Anthony to obtain pills for the plan. Characters: Natalie, Anthony
Location: Unspecified
-
Pills Are Stolen — Anthony steals sleeping pills from his father's doctor's surgery. Characters: Anthony, Natalie
Location: Anthony's father's doctor's surgery
-
The Group Masks Up — Five young people approach Bernard masked and dressed in black. Characters: Cate, Natalie, Nick, Anthony, Bernard
Location: Bernard's isolated bushland home
A Failed Attack
The masked group arrives at Bernard's isolated home and attempts to kill him. Their plan to stage a suicide fails when Bernard fights for his life.
Key Events
-
The Group Arrives — The group reaches Bernard's isolated home after the funeral. Characters: Cate, Natalie, Nick, Anthony, Bernard
Location: Bernard's home
-
Attack On Bernard — The masked group attacks Bernard with the intention of killing him. Characters: Bernard, Cate, Natalie, Nick, Anthony
Location: Bernard's home
-
Suicide Staging Attempt — The group tries to make Bernard's death look like suicide. Characters: Bernard, Natalie, Nick, Anthony, Cate
Location: Bernard's home
-
The Plan Fails — The attempt fails and does not produce the intended death. Characters: Bernard, Natalie, Nick, Anthony, Cate
Location: Bernard's home
-
Bernard Fights Back — Bernard fights for his life as the attack goes wrong. Characters: Bernard, Natalie, Nick, Anthony, Cate
Location: Bernard's home
Secrets After Violence
The aftermath forces questions about the attack and the events surrounding Alice's death. Lies and hidden secrets begin to destabilize the friends.
Key Events
-
The Attack's Aftermath — The failed attack leaves the group facing severe consequences. Characters: Bernard, Natalie, Nick, Anthony, Cate
Location: Bernard's home
-
Questions Emerge — The events leading to the attack and Alice's death are questioned. Characters: Bernard, Natalie, Nick, Anthony, Cate
Location: Unspecified aftermath
-
Lies Come Forward — Lies within the group begin to surface. Characters: Bernard, Natalie, Nick, Anthony, Cate
Location: Unspecified aftermath
-
Hidden Secrets Unravel — Secrets surrounding Alice and the attack alter the group's understanding. Characters: Bernard, Natalie, Nick, Anthony, Cate, Alice
Location: Unspecified aftermath
Justice Without Return
The group questions each other's motives as its revenge campaign becomes morally darker. Their pursuit of justice carries them to a point of no return.
Key Events
-
The Group Splinters — The once-tight friends begin questioning one another's motives. Characters: Natalie, Nick, Anthony, Cate
Location: Unspecified aftermath
-
Justice Turns Dark — Their pursuit of justice places them on its dark side. Characters: Bernard, Natalie, Nick, Anthony, Cate
Location: Unspecified aftermath
-
No Return — The weight of their quest drives the group beyond a point of return. Characters: Bernard, Natalie, Nick, Anthony, Cate
Location: Unspecified aftermath
-
Moral Consequences — The failed revenge exposes the moral collapse behind their justice campaign. Characters: Bernard, Natalie, Nick, Anthony, Cate
Location: Unspecified aftermath