Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Life Put On Hold
Zach works, paints, surfs, and cares for Cody while postponing art school. His unstable relationship with Tori exists alongside his family responsibilities.
Key Events
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Zach's Family Burden — Zach works and paints while helping Jeanne and caring for Cody. Characters: Zach, Jeanne, Cody
Location: San Pedro
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Deferred Art Ambition — Zach postpones art school to support his family. Characters: Zach
Location: Zach's home
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Shaun Returns Home — Shaun returns from Los Angeles for several weeks. Characters: Shaun, Gabe's Friend, Zach
Location: San Pedro
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Surfing Friendship — Zach and Shaun grow close while surfing together. Characters: Zach, Shaun
Location: San Pedro beach
The Dangerous Attraction
Shaun returns home and forms a close friendship with Zach through surfing and conversations about art. A kiss and a night together force Zach to confront feelings he has avoided.
Key Events
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Surfing Friendship — Zach and Shaun grow close while surfing together. Characters: Zach, Shaun
Location: San Pedro beach
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Shaun Encourages Zach — Shaun urges Zach to pursue CalArts and control his life. Characters: Zach, Shaun
Location: Shaun's home
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Unexpected Kiss — After drinking, Shaun kisses Zach, who becomes conflicted. Characters: Zach, Shaun
Location: Shaun's home
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Zach Leaves Tori — Zach breaks up with his on-and-off girlfriend Tori. Characters: Zach, Tori
Location: San Pedro
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First Night Together — Zach visits Shaun, and the two sleep together. Characters: Zach, Shaun
Location: Shaun's house
Love Under Pressure
Zach, Shaun, and Cody enjoy time together as Shaun bonds with the child. Gabe is supportive, but Jeanne's homophobic opposition creates pressure that leads Zach to end the relationship.
Key Events
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Jeanne Plans Portland — Jeanne says she and Alan are going to Portland for his interview. Characters: Jeanne, Alan, Zach, Cody
Location: Jeanne's home
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A Shared Visit — Shaun welcomes Zach and Cody, and they spend time together. Characters: Zach, Shaun, Cody
Location: Shaun's house
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Family Discovers Romance — Gabe and Jeanne learn about Zach's relationship with Shaun. Characters: Zach, Jeanne, Gabe's Friend, Shaun
Location: San Pedro
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Jeanne Rejects Shaun — Jeanne objects to Cody spending time with Shaun because of his sexuality. Characters: Jeanne, Zach, Shaun, Cody
Location: Jeanne's home
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Zach Ends Romance — Zach ends things with Shaun, saying he is not like him. Characters: Zach, Shaun
Location: A party
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Shaun Challenges Zach — Shaun calls Zach a coward for avoiding his obvious feelings. Characters: Zach, Shaun
Location: A party
The Choice To Begin
Shaun submits Zach's application, and CalArts responds with an opportunity. Jeanne's plan to move without Cody forces Zach to choose between family duty and his own future.
Key Events
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Secret CalArts Application — Shaun secretly submits Zach's application and portfolio. Characters: Shaun, Zach
Location: Shaun's home
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CalArts Calls — CalArts confirms receipt of Zach's portfolio and application. Characters: Zach
Location: Zach's home
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Jeanne Chooses Portland — Jeanne announces she will permanently move to Oregon without Cody. Characters: Jeanne, Alan, Zach, Cody
Location: Jeanne's home
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Tori Offers Perspective — Tori urges Zach to choose between CalArts and caregiving for himself. Characters: Zach, Tori
Location: Tori's home
A Family Reimagined
Zach reconciles with Shaun and decides to pursue his art career. He confronts Jeanne, secures Cody's care with Shaun, and begins a new family life on the beach.
Key Events
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Zach Reconciles With Shaun — Zach apologizes, confesses his acceptance, and reaffirms his love for Shaun. Characters: Zach, Shaun
Location: San Pedro
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Cody's Custody Ultimatum — Zach confronts Jeanne and says Cody will live with him and Shaun. Characters: Zach, Shaun, Jeanne, Alan, Cody
Location: Jeanne's home
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Custody Fight — A fight breaks out before Zach reassures Jeanne about Cody's care. Characters: Zach, Shaun, Jeanne, Cody
Location: Jeanne's home
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Jeanne Leaves Cody — Jeanne relents and leaves Cody with Zach and Shaun before going to Portland. Characters: Jeanne, Alan, Zach, Shaun, Cody
Location: Jeanne's home
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A New Family On The Beach — Zach, Shaun, and Cody happily play together as a family. Characters: Zach, Shaun, Cody
Location: The beach
Forced to give up his dreams of art school, Zach works dead-end jobs to support his sister and her son. Questioning his life, he paints, surfs and hangs out with his best friend, Gabe. When Gabe's older brother returns home for the summer, Zach suddenly finds himself drawn into a relationship he didn't expect.