Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Doorstep Of Loss
Audrey's stable family life is shattered when police bring news of her husband's death. Her forgotten failure to notify Jerry leads Neal to bring him to the funeral.
Key Events
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A Stable Family Life — Audrey lives in a loving marriage with two children. Characters: Audrey Burke
Location: Family home
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A Lifelong Friendship — Jerry is introduced as a heroin addict and longtime childhood friend. Characters: Jerry Sunborne
Location: Unspecified
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Death At The Door — Police tell Audrey that her husband has been killed while defending a woman. Characters: Audrey Burke
Location: Audrey's home doorway
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The Funeral Approaches — Audrey prepares for the funeral while overwhelmed by grief. Characters: Audrey Burke
Location: Family home
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A Forgotten Notification — Audrey realizes she forgot to tell Jerry about the death. Characters: Audrey Burke, Neal
Location: Funeral setting
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Neal Finds Jerry — Neal delivers the news and takes Jerry to the funeral. Characters: Neal, Jerry Sunborne
Location: Jerry's location
Shelter Beside The Garage
Audrey offers Jerry a place to stay as he struggles to remain free from heroin. He gradually forms a close bond with the children and becomes an important source of comfort for Audrey.
Key Events
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An Offer Of Shelter — Audrey invites Jerry to stay in a room beside the garage. Characters: Audrey Burke, Jerry Sunborne
Location: Family home
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The Garage Room — Jerry moves into the room offered by Audrey. Characters: Jerry Sunborne
Location: Room adjacent to the garage
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Fighting The Addiction — Jerry struggles to remain drug-free while staying with Audrey. Characters: Jerry Sunborne
Location: Family home
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A Bond With The Children — Jerry becomes very fond of Audrey's daughter and son. Characters: Jerry Sunborne
Location: Family home
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A Night Of Comfort — Jerry lies with Audrey to help her sleep through her grief. Characters: Audrey Burke, Jerry Sunborne
Location: Bedroom
Grief And Resentment
Jerry's support helps Audrey endure sleeplessness, but her grief turns against him. His success helping the son at the pool reopens painful comparisons with the deceased husband.
Key Events
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Grief Turns To Anger — Audrey's grief becomes anger directed at Jerry. Characters: Audrey Burke, Jerry Sunborne
Location: Family home
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The Pool Success — Jerry helps the son overcome his fear of submerging his head. Characters: Jerry Sunborne
Location: Swimming pool
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A Painful Comparison — Audrey becomes angry because the achievement was something her husband had tried to accomplish. Characters: Audrey Burke, Jerry Sunborne
Location: Swimming pool
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Questioning The Absence — Jerry questions Audrey's reaction to the daughter's truancy from school. Characters: Audrey Burke, Jerry Sunborne
Location: Family home
The Cost Of Expulsion
Jerry challenges Audrey's response to the daughter's school absence, and Audrey orders him out. The separation drives Jerry into a heroin relapse.
Key Events
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Jerry Is Expelled — Audrey demands that Jerry leave the house. Characters: Audrey Burke, Jerry Sunborne
Location: Family home
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The Relapse — After leaving, Jerry relapses with heroin. Characters: Jerry Sunborne
Location: Unspecified
A Difficult Acceptance
Audrey and Neal rescue Jerry and support his rehabilitation. Jerry enters a specialized clinic, leaves a note for the daughter, and later offers Audrey flowers and a message of acceptance.
Key Events
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Rescue And Rehabilitation — Audrey and Neal rescue Jerry and help him begin rehabilitation. Characters: Audrey Burke, Neal, Jerry Sunborne
Location: Unspecified
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Choosing Clinical Recovery — Jerry agrees to admit himself to a specialized clinic. Characters: Audrey Burke, Jerry Sunborne, Neal
Location: Specialized clinic
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A Child's Acceptance — Jerry leaves a heartfelt note, and the daughter accepts his departure. Characters: Jerry Sunborne
Location: Family home
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Progress Toward Recovery — Jerry continues struggling with addiction but appears to be recovering. Characters: Jerry Sunborne
Location: Unspecified
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Accept The Good — Jerry leaves red flowers and a note repeating a phrase linked to Audrey's husband. Characters: Audrey Burke, Jerry Sunborne
Location: Audrey's doorstep
A recent widow invites her husband's troubled best friend to live with her and her two children. As he gradually turns his life around, he helps the family cope and confront their loss.