Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Dangerous Backdoor
Angela Bennett receives a disk containing a backdoor into Gatekeeper. The disk's sender dies in an aircraft crash before their planned meeting.
Key Events
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Bergstrom Receives HIV Diagnosis — Bergstrom is informed that he has tested positive for HIV and commits suicide. Characters: Michael Bergstrom
Location: United States Department of Defense
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Angela's Isolated Digital Life — Angela works remotely and maintains most relationships online or by telephone. Characters: Angela Bennett
Location: Venice, Los Angeles
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The Pi Backdoor Arrives — Angela receives a disk containing a backdoor into the Gatekeeper security system. Characters: Angela Bennett
Location: Angela's home office
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Dale's Planned Meeting — Angela plans to meet the sender of the disk the following morning. Characters: Angela Bennett
Location: Online communication
Vacation Becomes A Trap
Angela meets Jack Devlin in Cozumel and is drawn into a staged theft. She escapes an attempted killing but is left unconscious after a crash.
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Aircraft Navigation Failure — A navigation malfunction causes the aircraft carrying the disk's sender to crash.
Location: Near San Francisco
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Vacation In Cozumel — Angela travels to Cozumel, where she meets Jack Devlin during her vacation. Characters: Angela Bennett, Jack Devlin
Location: Cozumel, Mexico
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The Purse Is Stolen — Jack arranges a mugging, then searches the stolen purse for the disk. Characters: Angela Bennett, Jack Devlin
Location: Cozumel waterfront
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Angela Escapes The Boat — Angela finds a gun, confronts the robber, and flees before her dinghy crashes into rocks. Characters: Angela Bennett, Jack Devlin
Location: Cozumel waters
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Three Days Unconscious — Angela remains unconscious in the hospital for three days after the crash. Characters: Angela Bennett
Location: Cozumel hospital
A Life Deleted
Angela wakes to find her records erased and her identity reassigned. A demand for the disk confirms that the attack is organized.
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Three Days Unconscious — Angela remains unconscious in the hospital for three days after the crash. Characters: Angela Bennett
Location: Cozumel hospital
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Identity Records Erased — Angela discovers that the disk is ruined and her personal records have been deleted. Characters: Angela Bennett
Location: Cozumel hospital
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A False Identity Appears — Angela's Social Security number is assigned to another identity connected to an arrest record. Characters: Angela Bennett
Location: Cathedral Software telephone desk
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The Disk Is Demanded — A person impersonating Angela offers to restore her old life in exchange for the disk. Characters: Angela Bennett, Jack Devlin
Location: Cathedral Software telephone desk
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Hospital Computer Investigation — Angela uses the backdoor and a password to uncover the altered HIV test results. Characters: Angela Bennett, Michael Bergstrom
Location: Bethesda Naval Hospital computer system
The Digital Conspiracy
Angela investigates Bergstrom's death through hospital computers and connects the Pi backdoor to the Praetorians. The conspirators eliminate a crucial helper and continue pursuing her.
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The Praetorians Identified — Angela learns that the Pi backdoor is connected to the Praetorians and recent computer failures. Characters: Angela Bennett, Jack Devlin
Location: Online chat
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Champion Is Killed — The conspirators tamper with medical records, causing the death of Angela's former lover and helper. Characters: Angela Bennett, Jack Devlin
Location: Medical and pharmacy computer systems
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The Jail Escape Deception — Angela is arrested, then freed by a supposed FBI contact whom she recognizes as an impostor. Characters: Angela Bennett
Location: California Highway Patrol jail
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Flight To Cathedral — Wanted for murder, Angela hitchhikes to Cathedral and accesses the available computer system. Characters: Angela Bennett
Location: Cathedral Software office
Destroying Gatekeeper
Angela traces the operation to Gregg Microsystems and sends evidence to the FBI. She destroys Gatekeeper, defeats Jack, restores her identity, and sees Gregg arrested.
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Gregg's Scheme Exposed — Angela traces the sabotage operation to Gregg Microsystems and discovers the Gatekeeper profiteering scheme. Characters: Angela Bennett, Jeff Gregg
Location: Cathedral Software office
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The Mainframe Virus — Angela emails evidence to the FBI and tricks Jack into releasing a virus that destroys Gatekeeper. Characters: Angela Bennett, Jack Devlin, Jeff Gregg
Location: Moscone Center computer network
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Catwalk Confrontation — Jack accidentally shoots his accomplice, while Angela ambushes him and causes his fatal fall. Characters: Angela Bennett, Jack Devlin, Jeff Gregg
Location: Moscone Center catwalks
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Identity Restored — The destruction of Gatekeeper undoes the erasure of Angela's identity, and Gregg is arrested by the FBI. Characters: Angela Bennett, Jeff Gregg
Location: Los Angeles
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Reunion With Her Mother — Angela regains her life and reunites with her mother after the conspiracy is exposed. Characters: Angela Bennett
Location: Institutional care facility