Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Contracted Memory
Jennings works as a reverse engineer and accepts Rethrick's three-year Allcom contract. He enters the isolated project after meeting Porter and Dekker.
Key Events
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Memory Wipe Profession — Jennings uses memory wipes to protect client secrets, with Shorty's assistance. Characters: Michael Jennings, Shorty
Location: Near-future laboratory
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Rethrick Offers Contract — Rethrick offers Jennings a three-year isolated project in exchange for Allcom stock. Characters: Michael Jennings, James Rethrick
Location: Allcom meeting area
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Allcom Campus Tour — Jennings receives a memory marker, tours Allcom, and meets biologist Rachel Porter. Characters: Michael Jennings, James Rethrick, Rachel Porter
Location: Allcom campus
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Dekker Introduction — Rethrick introduces Jennings to his work partner during the secret project. Characters: Michael Jennings, James Rethrick
Location: Allcom research facility
A Futureless Awakening
Jennings wakes after the memory wipe and discovers that his valuable stock is gone. The envelope and FBI detention transform confusion into immediate danger.
Key Events
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Three Years Vanish — Jennings wakes after three years with no memory of the project. Characters: Michael Jennings, James Rethrick
Location: Allcom facility
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Stock Disappears — Jennings learns that he gave away the valuable Allcom stock weeks earlier. Characters: Michael Jennings
Location: Law office
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Envelope Of Objects — Jennings receives an envelope containing seemingly random personal possessions. Characters: Michael Jennings
Location: Allcom exit area
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FBI Detention — Dodge detains Jennings and links him to classified designs taken by the deceased Dekker. Characters: Michael Jennings, Agent Dodge
Location: FBI detention facility
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Envelope Enables Escape — Jennings uses the envelope items to find a way out of FBI custody. Characters: Michael Jennings, Agent Dodge
Location: FBI facility
Clues From Tomorrow
With Shorty's help, Jennings recognizes that the envelope predicts events and points toward a machine that can see the future. Rethrick begins pursuing him after discovering the sabotage.
Key Events
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Envelope Enables Escape — Jennings uses the envelope items to find a way out of FBI custody. Characters: Michael Jennings, Agent Dodge
Location: FBI facility
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Wolfe Spots Jennings — Wolfe sees Jennings leaving and warns Rethrick that the situation has become a problem. Characters: Michael Jennings, John Wolfe, James Rethrick
Location: Street outside FBI facility
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Shorty Investigates — Jennings meets Shorty to determine what happened during the missing three years. Characters: Michael Jennings, Shorty
Location: Shorty's workshop
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Lottery Numbers Match — A television lottery result matches numbers contained in the envelope. Characters: Michael Jennings, Shorty
Location: Shorty's workshop
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Future Machine Revealed — Jennings realizes he built a machine that could see the future and prepared the envelope. Characters: Michael Jennings, James Rethrick
Location: Allcom research facility
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Machine Is Sabotaged — Rethrick finds that Jennings rigged the machine to go offline after his departure. Characters: Michael Jennings, James Rethrick
Location: Allcom machine chamber
The Cost Of Foresight
Porter rescues Jennings, and the pair uncover microdot headlines predicting worldwide catastrophe. They decide that the machine must be destroyed.
Key Events
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Machine Is Sabotaged — Rethrick finds that Jennings rigged the machine to go offline after his departure. Characters: Michael Jennings, James Rethrick
Location: Allcom machine chamber
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Porter Rescues Jennings — A body double tries to coerce Jennings, but the real Porter arrives and rescues him. Characters: Michael Jennings, Rachel Porter, James Rethrick
Location: Cafe and surrounding streets
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Microdots Show Disaster — Microdots reveal future headlines involving market crises, political strife, a pandemic, and nuclear war. Characters: Michael Jennings, Rachel Porter
Location: Hiding place
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Plan To Destroy Machine — Jennings and Porter agree that the future-seeing machine must be destroyed. Characters: Michael Jennings, Rachel Porter
Location: Hiding place
The Timed Escape
Jennings and Porter return to Allcom while the FBI investigates. The machine is booby-trapped, Rethrick and Wolfe are killed during the catwalk confrontation, and Dodge hides evidence of Jennings' survival.
Key Events
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Return To Allcom — Jennings and Porter use the remaining envelope items to reenter Allcom as the FBI investigates. Characters: Michael Jennings, Rachel Porter, Agent Dodge
Location: Allcom laboratory
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Machine Booby Trap — Jennings repairs the circuit, arms a timed destruction trap, and views himself being shot on the catwalk. Characters: Michael Jennings, Rachel Porter
Location: Allcom machine chamber
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Catwalk Gunfire — Jennings dodges a bullet using the watch signal; it fatally strikes Rethrick while the trap kills Wolfe. Characters: Michael Jennings, Rachel Porter, James Rethrick, John Wolfe, Agent Dodge
Location: Allcom catwalks
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Machine Destroyed — The booby trap destroys the machine, Wolfe is killed, and the FBI begins a full investigation. Characters: Michael Jennings, Rachel Porter, John Wolfe, Agent Dodge
Location: Allcom laboratory
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Dodge Hides Watch — Dodge finds Jennings' watch, hides it, and declares Jennings dead. Characters: Agent Dodge, Michael Jennings
Location: Allcom laboratory
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Countryside Refuge — Jennings, Porter, and Shorty relocate to the countryside with Porter's rescued parrots. Characters: Michael Jennings, Rachel Porter, Shorty
Location: Countryside home
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Winning Ticket Found — Jennings recalls the message and finds the winning lottery ticket inside the parrot cage. Characters: Michael Jennings, Rachel Porter, Shorty
Location: Countryside home