Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Module From The Sky
Researchers in a derelict palace recover an obsolete transmission module. Its contents reveal the recorded fate of an astronaut whose spacecraft crashed decades earlier.
Key Events
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Derelict Palace Prologue — Two researchers rest in a derelict palace occupied by indigenous people.
Location: Derelict palace
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The Burning Object Arrives — A horse rider delivers a technological object said to have fallen from the sky in flames.
Location: Derelict palace
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Diary Inside the Module — The researchers discover an astronaut's recorded diary inside the obsolete module.
Location: Underground laboratory
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Dissident Astronauts Escape — A group of dissident astronauts escapes a degraded and vaguely dystopian Earth.
Location: Space
Founders Of A New Race
Dissident astronauts flee a degraded Earth but crash on an unnamed planet. Marta and Jerzy help establish a seashore settlement that becomes the source of a new humanity.
Key Events
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Dissident Astronauts Escape — A group of dissident astronauts escapes a degraded and vaguely dystopian Earth.
Location: Space
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Crash On Another World — The dissident astronauts crash-land on an unnamed Earth-like planet. Characters: Marta, Jerzy
Location: Unnamed Earth-like planet
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Only Three Remain — One astronaut dies from injuries, leaving Marta, Piotr, and Jerzy. Characters: Marta, Jerzy
Location: Crash site
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Settlement By The Sea — With communication lost, the surviving astronauts decide to settle on the seashore. Characters: Marta, Jerzy
Location: Seashore
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A New Humanity Begins — The survivors' settlement gives rise to a new human race. Characters: Marta, Jerzy
Location: Seashore settlement
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Accelerated First Child — After her first son is born, Marta notices that he grows unusually fast. Characters: Marta
Location: Seashore settlement
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Piotr Is Killed — An unseen enemy kills Piotr while the settlement continues to develop. Characters: Marta, Jerzy
Location: Planetary settlement
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Marta Dies In Childbirth — Marta dies while giving birth, leaving Jerzy behind. Characters: Marta, Jerzy
Location: Planetary settlement
The Old Man's Legacy
The new humans develop rapidly and become increasingly estranged from Jerzy. Before his death, he records and sends a video diary that preserves the settlement's history.
Key Events
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Marta Dies In Childbirth — Marta dies while giving birth, leaving Jerzy behind. Characters: Marta, Jerzy
Location: Planetary settlement
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The Old Man Remains — Decades later, Jerzy is old but has aged more slowly than the new humans. Characters: Jerzy
Location: Planetary settlement
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The Tribe Reveres Jerzy — The partially feral descendants can no longer communicate with Jerzy and regard the Old Man as a demigod. Characters: Jerzy
Location: Planetary settlement
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Jerzy Sends The Diary — Before dying, Jerzy sends Earth a video diary recorded with handheld cameras. Characters: Jerzy
Location: Planetary settlement
The False Messiah
Marek arrives and is mistaken for the returning Old Man. He accepts the messianic role and leads the human campaign against the Sherns.
Key Events
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Marek Travels To The Planet — Many years later, the planetary scientist Marek travels to the planet. Characters: Marek
Location: Unnamed Earth-like planet
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Marek Declared Messiah — The priests mistake Marek for the returning Old Man and declare him the messiah. Characters: Marek
Location: Human settlement
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War Against The Sherns — Marek accepts the messianic role and leads a military campaign against the Sherns. Characters: Marek
Location: Planetary battlefield
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Avius Is Captured — The human forces initially succeed and capture the Shern leader Avius. Characters: Marek
Location: Planetary battlefield
Prophecy Turns Against Him
The landing in the Shern city ends in disaster, while the priests reconsider Marek's identity. The Earth-based motive involving Jacek is revealed before Marek is stoned and crucified.
Key Events
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Landing In Shern City — A subsequent human landing in the Shern city ends in disaster. Characters: Marek
Location: Shern city
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Earth Betrayal Revealed — The story reveals that Marek was sent away because his girlfriend and Jacek wanted to continue their affair. Characters: Marek, Jacek
Location: Earth
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Priests Reject Marek — The priests begin to regard Marek as an Earth outcast rather than the prophesied messiah. Characters: Marek
Location: Human settlement
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Marek Is Stoned — Marek is attacked and stoned after losing the priests' support. Characters: Marek
Location: Human settlement
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Marek Is Crucified — Marek's rejection culminates in his crucifixion. Characters: Marek
Location: Human settlement
A small group of cosmic explorers, including a woman, leaves Earth to start a new civilization. They do not realize that within themselves they carry the end of their own dream. They die one by one, while their children revert to a primitive native culture, creating new myths and a new god.