Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Household Built on Grief
After the crash kills Richard, Mary cares for Stephen while struggling with guilt and considering a care home. Her discovery of a child in her car begins a series of unsettling events.
Key Events
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The Fatal Car Crash — Stephen and Richard argue; their car swerves into oncoming traffic, killing Richard and leaving Stephen in a vegetative state. Characters: Stephen Portman, Richard
Location: Road to boarding school
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Mary Cares for Stephen — Six months later, Mary tends to Stephen, believing he remains in a vegetative state. Characters: Mary Portman, Stephen Portman
Location: Mary's house
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Mary's Guilt — Mary discusses her guilt and her decision to place Stephen in a care home with Wilson. Characters: Mary Portman, Dr. Wilson
Location: Mary's home office
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Tom Found in the Car — Mary discovers a sleeping child in her car and brings him inside. Characters: Mary Portman
Location: Mary's car
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The Child Vanishes — After Mary brings the child inside and makes a call, he disappears; a police search finds nothing. Characters: Mary Portman
Location: Mary's house
The House Turns Strange
The child disappears, yet Mary continues hearing and seeing him. Wilson suspects parasomnia, while Mary's encounter with the crawlspace and Stephen's unexplained condition deepen her fear.
Key Events
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Nighttime Apparitions — Mary wakes to sounds and sees the child in the darkness. Characters: Mary Portman
Location: Mary's house
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Wilson Suspects Parasomnia — Wilson attributes Mary's experiences to parasomnia and orders blood tests. Characters: Mary Portman, Dr. Wilson
Location: Mary's home office
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Doug Invites Mary Out — Doug asks Mary out; she initially declines because of professional boundaries, then later accepts dinner. Characters: Mary Portman, Doug Hart
Location: Mary's house
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Stephen Disappears from Bed — After dinner, Mary finds Stephen missing from his bed and notices the crawlspace door ajar. Characters: Mary Portman, Stephen Portman
Location: Mary's house
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Hands in the Crawlspace — As Mary examines the open crawlspace, small hands grab her from inside; she later wakes on the floor. Characters: Mary Portman
Location: Crawlspace entrance
The Deception Uncovered
Wilson discovers Stephen's medication in Mary's blood and sees Stephen walking. Stephen then reveals that he has been awake, has drugged Mary, and has kept the child trapped in the crawlspace.
Key Events
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Medication in Mary's Blood — Wilson tells Mary Stephen's medication is in her blood; he sees Stephen walk before the power fails. Characters: Mary Portman, Dr. Wilson, Stephen Portman, Lucy
Location: Mary's house and video call
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Stephen Knocks Mary Out — During the blackout, Mary sees the child, then Stephen appears and knocks her unconscious. Characters: Mary Portman, Stephen Portman
Location: Basement
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Stephen Reveals the Deception — Bound in the bathtub, Mary hears Stephen explain that he has been awake and pretending to be incapacitated. Characters: Mary Portman, Stephen Portman
Location: Bathroom
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The Crawlspace Prison — Stephen explains that the child was trapped in the crawlspace and that he has been drugging Mary. Characters: Mary Portman, Stephen Portman
Location: Bathroom and crawlspace
Flight Through the Storm
Mary frees herself and learns Stephen deliberately caused Richard's death. Wilson is attacked, and Mary escapes the sealed house with the child through a skylight.
Key Events
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Mary Escapes the Bonds — Mary uses a shampoo bottle to loosen her bonds and induce vomiting after Stephen makes her swallow a pill. Characters: Mary Portman
Location: Bathroom
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Wilson Crashes in the Storm — Wilson rushes toward Mary's house, wrecks his car, and cannot successfully call the police because of the ice storm. Characters: Dr. Wilson
Location: Road to Mary's house
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Stephen's Confession — Mary finds Stephen preparing to kill the child and learns that Stephen deliberately caused Richard's fatal crash. Characters: Mary Portman, Stephen Portman
Location: Basement
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Wilson Is Attacked — Wilson arrives to warn Mary, but Stephen attacks and stabs him; Wilson advises Mary to play along. Characters: Dr. Wilson, Stephen Portman
Location: Mary's house
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Escape Through the Skylight — With doors and windows nailed shut, Mary breaks a skylight and pulls the child out. Characters: Mary Portman, Stephen Portman
Location: Mary's house
The Lake and Aftermath
At the lake, Stephen tries to drown the child, and Mary kills Stephen with the hammer. Days later, Mary and the child go to the Child and Adoption Center.
Key Events
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Confrontation at the Lake — Stephen tries to drown the child in freezing water; Mary strikes Stephen with the dropped hammer, killing him. Characters: Mary Portman, Stephen Portman
Location: Lake
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A New Beginning — Days later, Mary and the child go to the Child and Adoption Center. Characters: Mary Portman
Location: Child and Adoption Center