Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Future Interrupted
Ben approaches the end of parole and hopes to build a life with Lisa and Katie. Ricky's debt draws Ben into a robbery that goes wrong, after which Ben is told he cannot return to his family.
Key Events
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The Jaybird Story — Ben tells Katie about shooting a jaybird and praying until it flies away. Characters: Ben Garvey, Katie Garvey
Location: Unspecified
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Parole Nears Its End — Ben looks forward to a better life with Lisa and Katie as his parole ends. Characters: Ben Garvey, Lisa Garvey
Location: Unspecified
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Plans for the Country — Lisa hopes to train as a real-estate agent as the couple imagine moving to the country. Characters: Ben Garvey, Lisa Garvey
Location: Unspecified
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Ricky Requests Help — Ricky, burdened by debts, asks Ben to join a robbery and brings Phelps. Characters: Ben Garvey, Ricky Garvey, Phelps
Location: Unspecified
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Ben Joins the Robbery — Ben reluctantly agrees to take part despite distrusting Phelps. Characters: Ben Garvey, Ricky Garvey, Phelps
Location: Unspecified
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The Robbery Goes Wrong — The robbery goes wrong; Ben is later told that men died. Characters: Ben Garvey, Ricky Garvey, Phelps
Location: Unspecified
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A Life-or-Death Warning — Ben is warned he cannot return to Lisa and Katie and must accept a new life or face death. Characters: Ben Garvey
Location: Unspecified
The Groundskeeper's New World
Ben finds himself at Mount Angel, working as a groundskeeper and struggling to understand where he is. He meets Julie and Father Ezra while maintaining that his family is still out there.
Key Events
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A Life-or-Death Warning — Ben is warned he cannot return to Lisa and Katie and must accept a new life or face death. Characters: Ben Garvey
Location: Unspecified
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Arrival at Mount Angel — Ben finds himself at Mount Angel, where he works as a groundskeeper. Characters: Ben Garvey
Location: Mount Angel
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Meeting Julie and Ezra — Ben meets counselor Julie and Father Ezra while insisting his family is still out there. Characters: Ben Garvey, Julie Ingram, Father Ezra
Location: Mount Angel
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William's Suspicion — Ben encounters William, who believes people are watching him and eventually escapes. Characters: Ben Garvey, William Reeds
Location: Mount Angel
Searching Against Doubt
Ben confides in Julie about guilt and his inability to let go of the past. His search for proof of his family's survival is challenged when Father Ezra says the cabin is empty and the dog is not real.
Key Events
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Ben Confides in Julie — Ben shares his difficulty letting go of the past and the guilt that haunts him. Characters: Ben Garvey, Julie Ingram
Location: Mount Angel
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Searching for Family Proof — Ben seeks proof his family is alive; Ezra says the cabin is empty and the dog is not real. Characters: Ben Garvey, Father Ezra
Location: The remembered cabin
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Ben Is Restrained — Ben becomes distressed after Ezra challenges his beliefs and is restrained. Characters: Ben Garvey
Location: Mount Angel
Learning to Move Forward
After being restrained, Ben tells Julie about his visions and fear of leaving Mount Angel. Julie offers a non-supernatural interpretation, and Ben decides to start over without forgetting his family.
Key Events
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Visions Reconsidered — Julie suggests Ben's visions may reflect his struggle to heal rather than supernatural forces. Characters: Ben Garvey, Julie Ingram
Location: Mount Angel
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Choosing to Start Over — Ben chooses to move forward, requests outdoor work, and admits he needs a light to sleep. Characters: Ben Garvey, Julie Ingram
Location: Mount Angel