Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A City Under New Smoking Rules
A public notice announces an expanded smoking ban, followed by an unresolved incident involving a man trapped in a car trunk. The narrative then shifts to the outdoor smoking culture surrounding work and social life.
Key Events
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Smoking Ban Expanded — A public notice announces Hong Kong's expanded smoking ban.
Location: Hong Kong
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Man Trapped in a Trunk — A man wakes trapped in a car trunk and calls for help.
Location: Parking lot
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Attempts to Free the Man — A passerby and police try to free the trapped man; his fate remains unknown.
Location: Parking lot
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Outdoor Smoking Social Life — The focus shifts to people whose work and social lives revolve around outdoor smoking. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy
Location: Outdoor smoking area
A Number and a New Connection
After coworkers tease one another, Cherie and Jimmy begin talking. Jimmy uses a reported UFO as a pretext to ask for her number, and their exchanges become increasingly personal as they plan to meet.
Key Events
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Coworkers Tease Each Other — Coworkers tease one another before Cherie and Jimmy begin talking. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy
Location: Workplace
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UFO Excuse for Her Number — Jimmy asks for Cherie's number, claiming he will send information about a reported UFO. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy
Location: Workplace
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Conversations Turn Personal — Their conversations gradually become more personal. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy
Location: Not specified
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Plans to Meet — Cherie and Jimmy make plans to meet as their closeness grows. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy
Location: Not specified
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Jimmy Questions Their Closeness — Jimmy tries to determine whether their connection is more than friendship. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy
Location: Not specified
Rules and Unsettled Feelings
Cherie describes her two-year relationship and its strict boundaries, including restrictions on calls and going home. She also recounts reconsidering a past attempt to end it, while her growing connection with Jimmy adds tension.
Key Events
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Jimmy Questions Their Closeness — Jimmy tries to determine whether their connection is more than friendship. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy
Location: Not specified
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Cherie's Restricted Relationship — Cherie describes a two-year relationship governed by rules about going home and calling. Characters: Cherie
Location: Not specified
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A Previous Breakup Reconsidered — Cherie says she once tried to end the relationship but reconsidered after hearing that their meeting was a blessing. Characters: Cherie
Location: Not specified
Suspicion and Hurt
A cigarette burn and a message prompt questions about Cherie's circumstances. An argument about her whereabouts, contraceptive injections, and possible involvement with someone else exposes suspicion and hurt without clarifying exactly what happened.
Key Events
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Burn and Message Raise Questions — A burn on Cherie's neck and a message asking if it still hurts prompt questions about who dropped her off. Characters: Cherie
Location: Not specified
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Argument Over Suspicion — An argument about Cherie's whereabouts, contraceptive injections, and possible involvement with someone else reveals suspicion and hurt. Characters: Cherie
Location: Not specified
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Jimmy Reflects on Timing — Jimmy reflects that feelings may emerge after the chance to confess them has passed. Characters: Jimmy
Location: Not specified
Midnight Cigarette Rush
Jimmy reflects on attraction and missed chances as an immediate tobacco-duty increase is announced. People hurry to buy cigarettes before the new price takes effect, and the account ends without resolving Cherie's relationships or the trapped man's fate.
Key Events
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Last-Minute Cigarette Rush — After tobacco duty rises immediately, people rush to buy cigarettes before midnight; the excerpt ends without resolving the relationships. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy
Location: Shop