Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Detour into Valkenvania
Chris meets Diane and agrees to drive her to Atlantic City. An unexpected road-trip detour brings them into Valkenvania, where a traffic violation leads to capture.
Key Events
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Penthouse Party Meeting — Chris meets Diane at his party and agrees to escort her to Atlantic City. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson
Location: Chris's Manhattan penthouse
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Road Trip Invitation — Two Brazilian siblings overhear the plan and invite themselves on the trip. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson
Location: Manhattan penthouse
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Scenic Detour — The travelers leave the New Jersey Turnpike for a scenic route. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson
Location: New Jersey roads
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Stop Sign Violation — Chris runs a stop sign and attempts to outrun the pursuing chief. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Dennis / Eldona
Location: Valkenvania outskirts
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Capture at Valkenvania — The travelers are captured and brought before the elderly Judge. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Dennis / Eldona, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Valkenvania courthouse
The Judge's Hidden Court
The Judge imprisons the travelers beneath the courthouse and exposes his deadly execution practices. His hatred of bankers is connected to a family betrayal from 1917.
Key Events
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Capture at Valkenvania — The travelers are captured and brought before the elderly Judge. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Dennis / Eldona, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Valkenvania courthouse
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Hidden Room Sentence — The Judge takes offense at Chris and locks the travelers away. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Hidden room beneath the courthouse
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Mr. Bonestripper Witnessed — The captives overhear the Judge executing convicted drug dealers in a deadly roller coaster. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Courthouse execution area
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Dinner and Banker Grudge — The Judge explains his family’s historical hatred of bankers. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Valkenheiser house dining room
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Escape Attempt — The group attempts escape; the Brazilian siblings jump through a window. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Dennis / Eldona, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Valkenheiser property
Secrets Behind the Traps
Escape attempts divide the group and cause Dennis to abandon his duties. Chris and Diane uncover records proving that the house has captured undesirables for generations.
Key Events
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Escape Attempt — The group attempts escape; the Brazilian siblings jump through a window. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Dennis / Eldona, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Valkenheiser property
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Dennis Changes Sides — Dennis is persuaded to abandon his stagnant career and leave with the siblings. Characters: Dennis / Eldona
Location: Edge of the Valkenheiser property
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The House Archives — Chris and Diane discover evidence of decades of captures and executions. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Attic room
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Salvage Yard Friendship — Diane meets and befriends the outcast Bobo and L'il Debbull. Characters: Diane Lightson, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Property salvage yard
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Bedroom Invasion — The Judge catches Chris exploring his bedroom and attacks him. Characters: Chris Thorne, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Judge's bedroom
Marriage and Machines
The Judge invokes house policy to force Chris toward marriage with Eldona. After Chris loses a possible source of help, the Judge sends him toward execution and uses Diane as bait.
Key Events
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Bedroom Invasion — The Judge catches Chris exploring his bedroom and attacks him. Characters: Chris Thorne, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Judge's bedroom
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Forced Marriage Order — After Chris collides with Eldona, the Judge invokes house policy and demands a marriage. Characters: Chris Thorne, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo, Dennis / Eldona
Location: Valkenheiser house
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Musical Court Performance — A speeding musical group performs to prove its identity and is acquitted. Characters: Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Valkenvania courtroom
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Execution Sentence — The Judge sentences Chris to execution after catching him asking for help. Characters: Chris Thorne, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Courthouse execution area
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Machine Breakdown Escape — The execution machine breaks down, allowing Chris to escape into the junkyard. Characters: Chris Thorne, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Mr. Bonestripper
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Gradertine Rescue — Chris triggers an explosion, distracts the Judge, and rescues Diane from the Gradertine. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Valkenheiser property
Fire beneath the Courthouse
Chris rescues Diane and escapes by freight train, but the authorities reveal their alliance with the Judge. Underground coal fires destroy the courthouse, although the Judge survives.
Key Events
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Gradertine Rescue — Chris triggers an explosion, distracts the Judge, and rescues Diane from the Gradertine. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Valkenheiser property
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Freight Train Escape — Chris and Diane escape the property by jumping onto a passing freight train. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson
Location: Railway beside Valkenvania
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Failed Police Raid — The authorities reveal their alliance with the Judge and prepare to eliminate the witnesses. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo, Dennis / Eldona
Location: Valkenvania courthouse
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Coal Fire Collapse — Uncontrolled coal fires destroy the courthouse and create a path for the pair's escape. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Valkenvania courthouse
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Brazilian New Life — Dennis becomes the siblings' security detail and Renalda's lover in Brazil. Characters: Dennis / Eldona
Location: Brazil
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Judge Survives — The Judge announces that his family survived and plans to move in with Chris. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: New York television broadcast
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Chris Flees Home — Chris panics and flees, leaving a cartoonish hole in the wall. Characters: Chris Thorne, Diane Lightson, Judge Alvin 'J.P' Valkenheiser / Bobo
Location: Chris's New York home
While attempting to seduce gorgeous lawyer Diane Lightson, wealthy gadabout Chris Thorne agrees to drive her to Atlantic City, N.J. But, when some reckless driving draws the attention of a deeply critical cop, they and the flamboyant "Brazillionaires" who tagged along end up in the court of a grotesque and vengeful judge, who has a special vendetta against the wealthy and erudite.