Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Comet Arrival
Roxanne arrives in Nelson to search for a comet, immediately drawing the attention of the local fire team. Her physical attraction to the handsome but dimwitted Chris McConnell sets the romantic premise in motion.
Key Events
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Roxanne's Comet Search Arrival — Roxanne arrives in town to search for a comet, drawing immediate attention. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski
Location: Nelson Town
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Chris Joins Fire Team — Chris is recruited as a handsome but dimwitted new fireman. Characters: Chris McConnell
Location: Fire Station
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Physical Attraction Sparks — Roxanne becomes physically attracted to Chris and assumes he is intelligent. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski, Chris McConnell
Location: Town Streets
The Ghostwritten Romance
Misunderstandings about Chris's intelligence lead to a series of ghostwritten letters and a disastrous date. A hidden confession deepens the emotional entanglement while Roxanne remains unaware.
Key Events
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Physical Attraction Sparks — Roxanne becomes physically attracted to Chris and assumes he is intelligent. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski, Chris McConnell
Location: Town Streets
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Sartre Book Purchase — Chris buys a Sartre book, reinforcing Roxanne's misconception of his intellect. Characters: Chris McConnell
Location: Bookstore
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Letter Writing Request — Roxanne asks for help approaching Chris on her behalf. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski, Chris McConnell
Location: Roxanne's Home
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Chris's Letter Struggle — Chris attempts to write a letter but struggles for a full day. Characters: Chris McConnell
Location: Chris's Home
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Ghostwritten Prose Success — A successful prose letter is written to woo Roxanne for Chris. Characters: Chris McConnell
Location: Fire Chief's Home
Secret Letters and Flirtations
While Roxanne is away, increasingly romantic letters are written daily. Meanwhile, Chris begins a new flirtation with bartender Sandy, shifting the emotional dynamics.
Key Events
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Ghostwritten Prose Success — A successful prose letter is written to woo Roxanne for Chris. Characters: Chris McConnell
Location: Fire Chief's Home
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Earphone Relay Setup — Chris wears earphones to relay words during their planned meeting. Characters: Chris McConnell
Location: Roxanne's Home
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Date Disaster and Breakup — Equipment fails, Chris objects to Roxanne, and she furiously ends the date. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski, Chris McConnell
Location: Roxanne's Home
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Hidden Tree Confession — A hidden figure confesses love while pretending to be Chris. Characters: Chris McConnell
Location: Roxanne's Garden
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Roxanne's Home Invitation — Roxanne invites Chris inside, unaware of the deception. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski, Chris McConnell
Location: Roxanne's Home
The Truth Unveiled
A final letter with a revealing note prompts Roxanne to compare handwriting and uncover the deception. Chris flees in insecurity, leaving town with Sandy.
Key Events
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Roxanne's Home Invitation — Roxanne invites Chris inside, unaware of the deception. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski, Chris McConnell
Location: Roxanne's Home
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Roxanne's Town Departure — Roxanne leaves town, leaving her address for Chris to write. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski
Location: Hotel
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Secret Romantic Letters — Increasingly romantic letters are written three times daily. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski
Location: Fire Chief's Home
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Chris and Sandy Flirtation — Chris and bartender Sandy begin flirting during the letter period. Characters: Chris McConnell, Sandy
Location: Local Bar
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Dixie's Romantic Advice — Dixie urges the fire chief to confess his true love to Roxanne. Characters: Dixie
Location: Fire Chief's Home
Rooftop Revelation and Resolution
A sudden fire interrupts the fallout, but Roxanne finds the fire chief on his roof. She confesses her love for his words and intellect, leading to a romantic reunion and a bittersweet comet naming.
Key Events
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Dixie's Romantic Advice — Dixie urges the fire chief to confess his true love to Roxanne. Characters: Dixie
Location: Fire Chief's Home
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Early Return Warning — A warning is rushed to Chris about Roxanne's early return, leaving a letter for Dixie. Characters: Chris McConnell, Dixie
Location: Fire Chief's Home
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Final Letter Delivery — Dixie delivers the final letter with a note revealing the true author. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski, Dixie
Location: Roxanne's Home
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Handwriting Comparison — Roxanne compares handwriting and realizes the truth behind the deception. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski
Location: Roxanne's Home
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Confrontation and Flight — Roxanne confronts Chris, who runs out feeling inadequate. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski, Chris McConnell
Location: Roxanne's Home
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Town Departure with Sandy — Chris leaves town with Sandy, writing a breakup letter to Roxanne. Characters: Chris McConnell, Sandy
Location: Town Outskirts
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Keen Smell Fire Detection — A sudden fire is detected through an extra-keen sense of smell. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski
Location: Fire Chief's Roof
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Fire Extinguishment — The team successfully extinguishes a large fire. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski
Location: Fire Site
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Rooftop Recitation — Roxanne recites the fire chief's words, revealing she fell in love with his intellect. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski
Location: Fire Chief's Roof
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Stylish Rooftop Descent — The fire chief descends stylishly, and they share a romantic kiss. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski
Location: Fire Chief's Roof
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Comet Naming Revelation — Roxanne reveals the comet is named after her father, not the fire chief. Characters: Roxanne Kowalski
Location: Fire Chief's Home
In this modern take on Edmond Rostand's classic play "Cyrano de Bergerac," C. D. Bales is the witty, intelligent, and brave fire chief of a small Pacific Northwest town who, due to the size of his enormous nose, declines to pursue the girl of his dreams, lovely Roxanne Kowalski. Instead, when his shy underling Chris McConnell becomes smitten with Roxanne, C.D. feeds the handsome young man the words of love to win her heart.