Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Office Jokes And Private Friction
The story opens inside a busy newspaper office. Eddy's intimate relationship turns sour, and a colleague criticizes him as a liability.
Key Events
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Newspaper Office Opens — Staff exchange greetings and jokes amid the busy newspaper routine. Characters: Eddy Taylor, Debbs
Location: Newspaper office
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Eddy's Intimate Encounter — Eddy becomes involved in an intimate encounter with his partner. Characters: Eddy Taylor
Location: Private room
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Relationship Argument — Eddy argues about the length of the relationship, apologizes, and leaves his partner hurt. Characters: Eddy Taylor
Location: Private room
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Eddy Called A Liability — A colleague criticizes Eddy as a real liability while work continues. Characters: Eddy Taylor
Location: Newspaper office
A Campaign Against Influence
Eddy and his allies seek a way to challenge Richard Morton's influence over the paper. They consider a damaging story and a useful photograph as political leverage.
Key Events
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Challenge To Richard — Eddy and his allies discuss resisting Richard Morton's influence over the paper. Characters: Eddy Taylor, Richard Morton
Location: Newspaper office
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Leverage Story Proposed — The group considers finding a damaging human-interest story to use as leverage. Characters: Eddy Taylor
Location: Newspaper office
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Morph Considered — Morph is identified as a photographer who might provide the campaign's essential image. Characters: Eddy Taylor, Morph
Location: Newspaper office
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Eddy Claims The Fight — Eddy insists that the struggle against the paper's opponents has been brought to him. Characters: Eddy Taylor
Location: Newspaper office
Protocol At The Palace
MJ attends a formal palace dinner and discovers that rigid gendered protocol limits her place at the table. She maintains lively conversation despite her frustration.
Key Events
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Palace Dinner Protocol — MJ learns she will sit among powerful men and leave after dessert as the only woman. Characters: Mary Josephine 'MJ' Morton, Royal Advisor #1
Location: Palace dining room
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MJ Challenges Protocol — MJ remains lively in conversation despite her frustration with the rigid dinner rules. Characters: Mary Josephine 'MJ' Morton, Felix Miles Sty
Location: Palace dining room
Two Headlines At War
The newspaper debates an anti-establishment campaign titled “Palace for the People.” A pro-royal “Camilla for Queen” alternative is retained as irony and protection.
Key Events
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Front Page Debate — Eddy and his colleagues weigh competing ideas for the next front page. Characters: Eddy Taylor
Location: Newspaper office
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People's Palace Campaign — The staff favors a headline challenging the royal establishment. Characters: Eddy Taylor
Location: Newspaper office
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Royal Countercampaign — A provocative pro-royal option is retained as irony and protection against retaliation. Characters: Eddy Taylor
Location: Newspaper office
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Campaign Strategy Splits — The debate reveals disagreement over whether the second campaign weakens the first. Characters: Eddy Taylor
Location: Newspaper office
An Unresolved Next Move
Graphics for both approaches are prepared, but the strategic disagreement remains unsettled. Debbs notices that Eddy is away from his office.
Key Events
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Graphics Enter Production — Graphics are prepared for both competing approaches to the newspaper campaign. Characters: Eddy Taylor
Location: Newspaper office
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Eddy Leaves His Office — Debbs notices Eddy is away, leaving the newspaper's next move unresolved. Characters: Eddy Taylor, Debbs
Location: Newspaper office