Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Wish Without Direction
Neal feels trapped between his artistic ambitions and Dad's expectations. A birthday wish, a hospital encounter, and impossible signs begin redirecting his life.
Key Events
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Folktale Debate — A student denies American wish-granting folktales before an elderly man describes O.W. Grant.
Location: A bar
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Grant's Strange Legend — O.W. Grant is described as a traveler who grants wishes, often with deceptive consequences. Characters: O.W. Grant
Location: A bar
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Birthday Discontent — Neal celebrates his twenty-second birthday while feeling unsupported in his artistic ambitions. Characters: Neal Oliver, Dad
Location: Neal's birthday party
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The Life-Wish — Neal wishes for an answer to his life and receives unwanted pressure toward law school. Characters: Neal Oliver, O.W. Grant, Dad
Location: Neal's birthday party
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The Misplaced BMW — Neal realizes the birthday car was clearly intended for Dad rather than for him. Characters: Neal Oliver, Dad
Location: Outside Neal's home
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Hospital Awakening — After being struck by a falling bucket, Neal wakes in a hospital and meets Ray. Characters: Neal Oliver, Ray
Location: Hospital
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Colors Defy Appearances — Ray reveals that the cards contain red spades and black hearts, challenging Neal's assumptions. Characters: Neal Oliver, Ray
Location: Hospital
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The Impossible Billboard — Neal sees a dreamlike woman on a billboard that the billboard company insists is blank. Characters: Neal Oliver
Location: A roadside billboard
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The Appointment Number — A new billboard image gives Neal a phone number and an appointment at 555 Olive Street. Characters: Neal Oliver
Location: Downtown telephone area
The Road That Isnt There
Ray sends Neal toward Danver with a mysterious package. Neal finds O.W. Grant and enters the strange route of Interstate 60.
Key Events
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The Appointment Number — A new billboard image gives Neal a phone number and an appointment at 555 Olive Street. Characters: Neal Oliver
Location: Downtown telephone area
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The Danver Package — Ray gives Neal a package for a recipient in Danver, Colorado, reachable through Interstate 60. Characters: Neal Oliver, Ray
Location: 555 Olive Street
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Searching For Interstate 60 — Neal searches for a nonexistent highway and encounters O.W. Grant beside the road. Characters: Neal Oliver, O.W. Grant
Location: Southbound roadside
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Grant's Road Directions — Grant directs Neal toward Interstate 60 and sends him deeper into the impossible journey. Characters: Neal Oliver, O.W. Grant
Location: Roadside near Interstate 60
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Roadside Encounters — Neal meets extraordinary travelers pursuing impossible appetites, perfect sex, family, honesty, and art. Characters: Neal Oliver
Location: Interstate 60
Lessons Along Interstate 60
Neal encounters bizarre communities and people whose desires expose contradictions in appetite, honesty, law, and art. Mrs. James reinforces the idea that appearances can deceive.
Key Events
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Roadside Encounters — Neal meets extraordinary travelers pursuing impossible appetites, perfect sex, family, honesty, and art. Characters: Neal Oliver
Location: Interstate 60
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Museum Of Art Fraud — Mrs. James displays genuine masterpieces while presenting them as fraudulent copies. Characters: Neal Oliver, Mrs. James
Location: Museum of Art Fraud
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Lawyers Of Morlaw — Neal reaches a town where every citizen is a lawyer constantly suing other citizens. Characters: Neal Oliver
Location: Morlaw
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The Motel Painting — Neal paints the motel, connecting his journey with the artistic identity he has long wanted. Characters: Neal Oliver
Location: A motel in Morlaw
The Road Turns Dangerous
After painting the motel, Neal hears a murder report connected to his car and abandons it. He continues toward Danver without knowing the package's true purpose.
Key Events
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The Motel Painting — Neal paints the motel, connecting his journey with the artistic identity he has long wanted. Characters: Neal Oliver
Location: A motel in Morlaw
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Murder Report — A radio report describes a murderer whose car matches Neal's, so Neal abandons the vehicle. Characters: Neal Oliver
Location: Roadside
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The Package Recipient — The supposed recipient is revealed to be O.W. Grant, and the package contains a replacement pipe. Characters: Neal Oliver, O.W. Grant
Location: Danver, Colorado
A Second Chance At Choice
In Danver, Neal discovers that Grant is the package's true recipient and is sent back in time. Neal then rejects Dad's control and receives recognition for his painting.
Key Events
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The Package Recipient — The supposed recipient is revealed to be O.W. Grant, and the package contains a replacement pipe. Characters: Neal Oliver, O.W. Grant
Location: Danver, Colorado
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The Timeline Rewinds — Grant uses his powers to send Neal back to the hospital before the first meeting with Ray. Characters: Neal Oliver, O.W. Grant
Location: Hospital
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Choosing His Own Life — Neal confronts Dad and claims the right to choose his own life without interference. Characters: Neal Oliver, Dad
Location: Outside Neal's home
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The Gallery Revelation — Neal discovers that Grant submitted his motel painting to an art gallery on his behalf. Characters: Neal Oliver, O.W. Grant
Location: Art gallery
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An Artistic Future — A woman connected to Danver Publishing offers Neal further roadside motel and diner painting work. Characters: Neal Oliver
Location: Art gallery