Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Shooting and Its Aftermath
Lou confronts an armed teenager who has wounded a patrolman, and the boy is killed. Public complaints and departmental scrutiny follow, while Helen tries to understand the incident.
Key Events
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Lou Confronts the Armed Teenager — Lou enters a building to confront an armed teenager who has wounded a patrolman. Characters: Lou Torrey
Location: Building
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The Teenager Is Killed — The armed teenager is killed during Lou's confrontation. Characters: Lou Torrey
Location: Building
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Public Scrutiny Follows the Shooting — Complaints and scrutiny follow the shooting, leaving Lou facing departmental enemies and a hearing. Characters: Lou Torrey
Location: Unspecified
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Helen Seeks to Understand — Lou's wife Helen tries to understand what happened during the shooting. Characters: Lou Torrey, Dr. Helen Torrey
Location: Unspecified
A New Post and New Killings
Lou accepts Les Daniels's offer of a West Coast post. He later becomes involved in connected killings, and his confrontation with Gus Lipper yields little useful information about the hired gun.
Key Events
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Lou Accepts a West Coast Post — Lou accepts Les Daniels's offer of a West Coast post. Characters: Lou Torrey, Les Daniels
Location: Unspecified
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A Series of Connected Killings Emerges — Lou becomes involved in a series of killings connected to an organized plot. Characters: Lou Torrey
Location: Unspecified
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Lou Confronts Gus Lipper — Lou confronts hired gun Gus Lipper, who is killed in the encounter. Characters: Lou Torrey, Gus Lipper
Location: Unspecified
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Investigators Find Little on Gus — Investigators find little useful information about Gus after his death. Characters: Lou Torrey, Gus Lipper
Location: Unspecified
Following the Conspiracy
Lou follows leads through people associated with Langley, including Paul Long, while encountering distrust of the police. The evidence points away from isolated crimes and toward a larger operation.
Key Events
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Lou Follows Langley-Linked Leads — Lou follows leads through people associated with Langley, including Paul Long. Characters: Lou Torrey, Langley, Paul Long
Location: Unspecified
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Resistance Complicates the Inquiry — Lou encounters resistance from people who do not trust the police. Characters: Lou Torrey
Location: Unspecified
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The Killings Reveal a Larger Operation — The investigation indicates that the killings belong to a much larger operation tied to Al Vescari. Characters: Lou Torrey, Al Vescari
Location: Unspecified
The Planned Counter-Strike
Al Vescari recalls the history behind a nationwide criminal alliance. A trained team is preparing to attack prominent crime leaders at a gathering, despite concerns that earlier failures may expose the plan.
Key Events
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Al Recalls the Factional History — Al recalls the violent history of rival factions and the formation of a nationwide criminal alliance. Characters: Al Vescari
Location: Unspecified
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A Strike Is Planned for the Gathering — A trained team prepares to attack prominent crime leaders at Al's birthday gathering. Characters: Al Vescari, Langley
Location: Unspecified
The House Confrontation
Lou continues pursuing leads despite criticism and danger, and information about the group's movements directs him to an old house connected to the Wextons. Officers surround it as crime council members arrive, but the supplied account ends before the outcome.
Key Events
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Lou Pursues the Remaining Leads — Despite criticism and danger, Lou continues investigating; information about Lawrence and the group's movements points him onward. Characters: Lou Torrey, Les Daniels
Location: Unspecified
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The Wexton House — The remaining leads point Lou toward an old house connected to the Wextons. Characters: Lou Torrey
Location: Old house connected to the Wextons
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Officers Surround the House — As crime council members arrive, Lou and other officers surround the house and order those inside to come out. Characters: Lou Torrey
Location: Old house connected to the Wextons
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The Raid's Outcome Remains Unresolved — The supplied dialogue ends as the confrontation begins, before the raid or planned attack is resolved. Characters: Lou Torrey, Al Vescari
Location: Old house connected to the Wextons