Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Job Turns Dangerous
Ray's alibi work entangles him in a case involving Wendell Hatch's family and Heather's disappearance. Police attention and a hired killer turn the job into a personal threat.
Key Events
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Ray's Alibi Business — Ray earns his living arranging alibis, with Lola working as his assistant and partner. Characters: Ray Elliot, Lola Davis
Location: Alibi agency
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Hatch Family Job — A job involving Wendell Hatch's family draws Ray into a dangerous situation. Characters: Ray Elliot
Location: Unspecified
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Heather Disappears — Heather, who had been with Wendell's son, has disappeared. Characters: Heather
Location: Santa Barbara
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Ray Names Putty — Ray admits that he arranged for Putty to handle the situation. Characters: Ray Elliot
Location: Unspecified
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Investigation Intensifies — Police investigate Heather's disappearance and question Wendell about Ray. Characters: Ray Elliot
Location: Unspecified
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A Killer Targets Ray — Ray learns that a dangerous man has been hired to kill him. Characters: Ray Elliot
Location: Unspecified
Threats Close In
Wendell's driver abducts and threatens Ray, who narrowly survives. Ray confides in Lola, who questions the risks and recommends seeking help.
Key Events
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A Killer Targets Ray — Ray learns that a dangerous man has been hired to kill him. Characters: Ray Elliot
Location: Unspecified
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Driver Abducts Ray — Wendell's driver abducts and threatens Ray, who narrowly survives. Characters: Ray Elliot
Location: Unspecified
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Ray Confides in Lola — Ray tells Lola about the disappearance, police pressure, and threat against him. Characters: Ray Elliot, Lola Davis
Location: Unspecified
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Lola Urges Caution — Lola questions whether the job is worth the risk and suggests seeking help from Ray's former partner. Characters: Ray Elliot, Lola Davis
Location: Unspecified
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Wendell Faces Questions — Wendell denies knowing much about Ray but acknowledges meeting him at a bar and having a brief altercation. Characters: Ray Elliot
Location: Unspecified
A Plan Unravels
As the investigation tightens, Ray and his allies try to prevent Wendell from escaping or provoking violence. Wendell's departure causes disagreement about whether to follow the plan.
Key Events
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Wendell Faces Questions — Wendell denies knowing much about Ray but acknowledges meeting him at a bar and having a brief altercation. Characters: Ray Elliot
Location: Unspecified
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Plan to Keep Wendell — Ray and his allies try to keep Wendell from escaping without letting matters turn violent. Characters: Ray Elliot, Lola Davis
Location: Unspecified
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Wendell Leaves — Wendell leaves, prompting an argument over whether to follow the plan or act independently. Characters: Ray Elliot
Location: Unspecified
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Lessons from a Former Partner — Ray recalls advice to prepare carefully without assuming people will act as expected. Characters: Ray Elliot
Location: Unspecified
Unresolved Hotel Confrontation
Ray reflects on preparation and trust as the events converge at the Ellroy Hotel. An armed man is identified amid conflicting claims, but the supplied plot ends before the confrontation is resolved.
Key Events
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Lessons from a Former Partner — Ray recalls advice to prepare carefully without assuming people will act as expected. Characters: Ray Elliot
Location: Unspecified
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Gathering at Ellroy Hotel — The events converge at the hotel as a police officer calls for assistance and Ray's whereabouts become uncertain. Characters: Ray Elliot, Lola Davis, Bob Hatch
Location: Ellroy Hotel
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Armed Man Identified — An armed man denies knowing Bob, another person calls him a liar, and someone identifies him as the sought-after man. Characters: Bob Hatch, Ray Elliot, Lola Davis
Location: Ellroy Hotel room