Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Probation's Final Countdown
Collin races against time to finish probation while Miles' paranoia grows amid Oakland's gentrification. Tension builds as Collin witnesses a police shooting and Miles acquires a weapon for self-protection.
Key Events
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Probation Countdown Begins — Collin struggles to finish the last three days of his probation. Characters: Collin, Miles
Location: Oakland Street
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Police Shooting Witnessed — Collin witnesses a white officer fatally shoot a fleeing black man. Characters: Collin
Location: Oakland Intersection
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Nightmares and Hallucinations — Haunted by the incident, Collin experiences severe nightmares. Characters: Collin
Location: Collin's Home
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Miles Buys Handgun — Miles purchases a weapon for self-protection amid gentrification fears. Characters: Miles
Location: Oakland
Gentrification and Gunfire
Collin attempts to mend ties with Val while Miles' erratic behavior escalates. A family emergency forces them to remove the gun, setting the stage for a volatile night out.
Key Events
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Miles Buys Handgun — Miles purchases a weapon for self-protection amid gentrification fears. Characters: Miles
Location: Oakland
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Collin Disapproves of Gun — Collin strongly disapproves of Miles acquiring the weapon. Characters: Collin, Miles
Location: Moving Van
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Reconnecting with Val — Collin attempts to reconnect with ex-girlfriend Val despite awkward distance. Characters: Collin, Val
Location: Oakland
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Flashback: Club Fight — Collin recalls the incident where he beat a customer, leading to his incarceration. Characters: Collin, Val
Location: Local Club
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Val's Warning — Val cautions Collin about the dangers of his friendship with Miles. Characters: Val, Collin
Location: Oakland
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Sean Finds the Gun — Sean discovers the gun, prompting Ashley to force them to remove it. Characters: Miles, Ashley, Collin
Location: Miles' Home
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Arrival at Upscale Party — Miles and Collin attend a party at a gentrified new home. Characters: Collin, Miles
Location: New Oakland House
Cultural Clash at the Party
Miles confronts racial tensions at a gentrified party, leading to violence and police intervention. Collin intervenes, sparking a heated argument that forces both men to confront their flaws.
Key Events
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Arrival at Upscale Party — Miles and Collin attend a party at a gentrified new home. Characters: Collin, Miles
Location: New Oakland House
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T-Shirt Misinterpretation — Rin misinterprets Miles' shirt as cultural appropriation, sparking tension. Characters: Miles, Rin
Location: Party
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Physical Altercation — Miles beats Rin, taking out his frustrations over Oakland's changing identity. Characters: Miles, Rin
Location: Party
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Gunfire at the Party — Miles fires his gun into the air, terrorizing guests while asserting his authenticity. Characters: Miles, Rin
Location: Party
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Collin Intervenes — Collin rushes Miles away and confiscates the weapon to prevent police arrival. Characters: Collin, Miles
Location: Party
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Explosive Argument — Collin criticizes Miles' reckless behavior and the trouble it causes. Characters: Collin, Miles
Location: Street
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Miles Reconciles with Ashley — Ashley treats Miles' injuries as they reconcile and acknowledge their struggles. Characters: Miles, Ashley
Location: Miles' Home
Confronting the System
Collin completes probation and discovers his next job involves the officer who committed the shooting. He confronts Molina, chooses restraint over violence, and ultimately repairs his bond with Miles.
Key Events
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Miles Reconciles with Ashley — Ashley treats Miles' injuries as they reconcile and acknowledge their struggles. Characters: Miles, Ashley
Location: Miles' Home
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Blind Spot Phone Call — Collin calls Val, referencing the face-vase illusion to ask if she sees past his past. Characters: Collin, Val
Location: Phone
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Probation Ends — Collin completes his probation but remains psychologically troubled. Characters: Collin
Location: Oakland
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Moving Officer Molina's House — Collin and Miles discover they are moving items for the officer who shot the man. Characters: Collin, Miles
Location: Molina's House
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Gunpoint Confrontation — Collin holds Molina at gunpoint, delivering a critical freestyle rap. Characters: Collin, Officer Molina, Miles
Location: Molina's House
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Property Destruction — Collin breaks property but chooses not to shoot, leaving the officer distraught. Characters: Collin, Officer Molina
Location: Molina's House
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Friendship Repaired — Collin and Miles drive off, having repaired their friendship after a solemn moment. Characters: Collin, Miles
Location: Moving Van
Collin must make it through his final three days of probation for a chance at a new beginning. He and his troublemaking childhood best friend, Miles, work as movers, and when Collin witnesses a police shooting, the two men’s friendship is tested as they grapple with identity and their changed realities in the rapidly-gentrifying neighborhood they grew up in.