Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Debt Closes In
An officer's financial troubles become public, while a falling flat value and mortgage payments deepen his anxiety. Conversations among colleagues show that debt and loan sharks are affecting people around them.
Key Events
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Speeding Dispute — An officer confronts a driver over speeding, but the driver demands proof.
Location: Roadside
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Debt Becomes Public — Newspapers report that an officer is deeply in debt.
Location: Police station
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Mortgage Pressure — An officer struggles with a mortgage on a flat that has lost value.
Location: Police station
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Fear of Bankruptcy — The officer fears bankruptcy could cost him his job.
Location: Police station
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Colleagues Discuss Debt — Officers discuss financial strain and the effects of loan sharks.
Location: Police station
A Shared Way Forward
A distressed officer considers jumping, but Jean Paul talks him down. Jean Paul offers to negotiate with the bank and reminds him that the police can deal with loan sharks.
Key Events
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Officer Near Despair — A distressed officer considers jumping to escape his debts.
Location: Unspecified location
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Jean Paul Intervenes — Jean Paul talks the distressed officer down and urges them to face their problems together. Characters: Jean Paul
Location: Unspecified location
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Offer of Legal Help — Jean Paul offers to negotiate with the bank as a lawyer and says police can deal with loan sharks. Characters: Jean Paul
Location: Unspecified location
Retaliation Takes Shape
Anger at the lenders leads an officer to advocate answering the triads in kind, despite warnings about breaking the law and risking their jobs. Jean Paul offers legal representation, and the officers begin targeting the lenders' operations.
Key Events
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Retaliation Proposed — An officer argues for answering the triads in kind, despite warnings about legality and their jobs.
Location: Police station
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Legal Defense Promised — Jean Paul offers to represent the officers if their retaliation leads to arrest. Characters: Jean Paul
Location: Police station
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Lenders Become Targets — The officers begin targeting the lenders' operations.
Location: Unspecified location
The Hidden Office
The officers plan to take documents from a loan shark's office during a staged distraction, but a Commercial Crime Bureau search finds no suspicious papers. A report that Chan Ho Lung visits another office points the investigation toward a possible second location, while the officers' personal debts remain unresolved.
Key Events
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Office Documents Plan — The officers plan to take documents while a staged emergency distracts the criminals. Characters: Lung's man guarding office
Location: Loan shark's office
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Search Finds Nothing — A Commercial Crime Bureau search finds no suspicious papers.
Location: Loan shark's office
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Second Office Revealed — An officer reports that Chan Ho Lung regularly visits another office before returning to his main base. Characters: Chan Ho Lung
Location: Another office
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Investigation Continues — The officers pursue the lenders' hidden business while still facing personal debts. Characters: Chan Ho Lung
Location: Unspecified office