Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Picnic Becomes Horror
A father takes the children from Sydney into the Outback for a supposed picnic. He attacks them with a gun, burns the car, and dies by suicide, leaving the girl responsible for escape.
Key Events
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Family Leaves Sydney — The girl and her younger brother leave Sydney with their father for an apparent picnic. Characters: Girl, Man
Location: Sydney high-rise apartment
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Picnic In The Outback — The family prepares to eat after reaching the remote desert. Characters: Girl, Man
Location: Outback picnic site
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The Gun Is Drawn — The father fires at the children, and the girl understands the danger. Characters: Girl, Man
Location: Outback rocks
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Flight Behind Rocks — The girl flees with her brother and hides behind rocks. Characters: Girl
Location: Rock shelter
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Car Burns — The girl watches the man burn the car and shoot himself. Characters: Girl, Man
Location: Desert picnic site
Water Beneath The Desert
The children walk through the desert and find temporary refuge at an oasis. When the water disappears, an Aboriginal boy discovers them and teaches them how to find more.
Key Events
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The Desert Journey Begins — The girl conceals the suicide and leads her brother away, trying to walk home. Characters: Girl
Location: Open desert
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Oasis Discovered — Weak from walking, the children find a water hole and a quandong tree. Characters: Girl
Location: Desert oasis
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Oasis Rest — The children play, bathe, and rest beside the oasis. Characters: Girl
Location: Desert oasis
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Water Hole Dries — By morning, the water has dried up and the children's danger returns. Characters: Girl
Location: Drying oasis
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A New Guide Appears — An Aboriginal boy discovers the children and shows them how to obtain water from the dry bed. Characters: Girl
Location: Drying oasis
Learning To Travel Together
The three children move through the Outback, sharing food and communicating through gestures and fragments of language. Encounters with a plantation and a weather balloon expose contrasting human worlds.
Key Events
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Three Travel Together — The children travel with their new guide, who shares meat from his hunt. Characters: Girl
Location: Outback tracks
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Gestures Become Language — The two boys communicate with gestures and words, while the girl remains distant. Characters: Girl
Location: Outback camp
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Plantation Encounter — A white woman speaks to the Aboriginal boy, who ignores her as the children continue onward. Characters: Girl, Man
Location: Plantation vicinity
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Weather Balloon Found — The children discover a weather balloon belonging to a nearby research team. Characters: Girl
Location: Desert research area
The Farm And The Hunters
The guide leads the children to an abandoned farm and toward a road. His encounter with white hunters, who kill buffalo wantonly, exposes a violent collision between cultures.
Key Events
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Abandoned Farm — After drawing a modern house, the guide leads the children to an abandoned farm. Characters: Girl
Location: Abandoned farm
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Roadside Separation — The guide takes the small boy to a nearby road while the girl remains connected to the farm. Characters: Girl
Location: Road near the farm
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Buffalo Hunters Arrive — Two white hunters nearly run over the guide and wantonly shoot several buffalo. Characters: Girl
Location: Buffalo grounds
A Dance Without An Answer
At the farmhouse, the guide performs a courtship ritual for the frightened girl. The next morning, the children discover his body, then continue toward a mining town and an uncertain return to ordinary life.
Key Events
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Failed Courtship Dance — The guide performs a prolonged courtship dance, but the frightened girl hides from him. Characters: Girl
Location: Abandoned farmhouse
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Death In The Tree — The girl and her brother find the Aboriginal boy's body hanging in a tree. Characters: Girl
Location: Near the farmhouse
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Ants On The Chest — The girl shows little emotion as she wipes ants from the dead boy's chest. Characters: Girl
Location: Tree near the farmhouse
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Mining Town Reached — The siblings reach a mining town where a surly employee directs them toward accommodation. Characters: Girl, Man
Location: Nearly deserted mining town
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Adult Life Returns — Years later, the adult girl prepares dinner as a man returns from work and embraces her. Characters: Girl, Man
Location: Urban home
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Memory In The Billabong — She imagines or remembers playing and swimming with the two boys in an Outback billabong. Characters: Girl
Location: Outback billabong