Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Scholarship In Peril
A studious scholarship student enters college but is distracted by a roommate's constant partying. Failed midterms reveal that the scholarship is in immediate danger.
Key Events
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Scholarship Admission — A highly studious student enters college on a scholarship.
Location: College
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Party Roommate Assignment — The scholarship student is assigned a roommate whose lifestyle centers on partying.
Location: College dormitory
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Academic Neglect — The roommate avoids studying, fails courses, and continues receiving tuition support.
Location: College dormitory
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Midterm Failure — The scholarship student follows the party lifestyle and fails every midterm examination.
Location: College
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Scholarship Requirement Revealed — The scholarship requires a yearly B-plus average, making recovery extremely difficult.
Location: College
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Funding Threat — A parent threatens to stop tuition funding unless the failing student passes.
Location: College
The Dangerous Rule
The roommates learn that a bizarre academic rule could grant perfect marks after a roommate's suicide. They begin searching for someone who might fit that grim condition.
Key Events
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Funding Threat — A parent threatens to stop tuition funding unless the failing student passes.
Location: College
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Desperate Academic Plan — The two roommates search for an extreme solution to their academic crisis.
Location: College dormitory
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Obscure Rule Discovered — They discover a rule granting perfect marks after a roommate's suicide.
Location: College
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Candidate Search Begins — They begin searching for a roommate they believe may commit suicide.
Location: College
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Cliff Joins The Scheme — Cliff O'Malley becomes their first potential roommate candidate. Characters: Cliff O'Malley
Location: College
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Cliff Evades Police — Cliff proves dangerously reckless and jumps from a moving car during a police chase. Characters: Cliff O'Malley
Location: Moving car
Paranoia In The Dorm
Cliff's recklessness ends the first attempt, so Buckley becomes the next candidate. A fake hotline call and planted suicide items cause Buckley to panic and flee.
Key Events
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Buckley Becomes Candidate — Buckley Schrank becomes the next potential roommate because of his paranoid beliefs. Characters: Buckley Schrank
Location: College
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Buckley Moves In — Buckley moves into the dorm room while believing a technology magnate wants his brain. Characters: Buckley Schrank
Location: Dorm room
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Fake Hotline Call — A roommate impersonates a suicide hotline volunteer and reinforces Buckley's paranoid belief. Characters: Buckley Schrank
Location: Dorm room
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Suicide Props Purchased — Potential suicide items are purchased and prepared for placement around the room. Characters: Buckley Schrank
Location: Dorm room
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Buckley Discovers The Plot — Buckley finds the items, believes he is being targeted, and flees. Characters: Buckley Schrank
Location: Dorm room
The Bridge And Beyond
Matt's apparent depression also proves questionable, leaving the scholarship crisis unresolved. A bridge confrontation leads to an additional semester and a more hopeful future.
Key Events
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Matt Moves In — Matt Noonan becomes the final roommate candidate because he appears moody and depressed. Characters: Matt Noonan
Location: Dorm room
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Matt's Hidden Persona — Matt is caught singing show tunes, suggesting his depressed persona may be performative. Characters: Matt Noonan
Location: Dorm room
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Bridge Suicide Ruse — Facing scholarship loss, one roommate stands on a bridge and appears ready to jump.
Location: Bridge
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Academic Second Chance — An additional semester is granted, the scholarship is saved, and the other student becomes more serious.
Location: College
Two college roommates venture out to identify a fellow student, who is most likely to commit suicide as it will help them pass the semester.