Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Rules Before Romance
The protagonist's disciplined career and controlled home reflect her resistance to romantic uncertainty. A nightmare and conversations with friends expose her anxiety about remaining unmarried.
Key Events
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A Disciplined Life — An ambitious accountant has organized her life around discipline, career success, and personal control.
Location: The protagonist's home
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The Wedding Nightmare — On Valentine's Day, she wakes from a nightmare about her own disastrous wedding.
Location: The protagonist's bedroom
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Friends' Night Out — She joins her girlfriends for an evening of laughter and conversation.
Location: A nightlife venue
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Marriage Statistics — The friends discuss sobering statistics about their chances of marriage.
Location: The nightlife venue
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Let Go Let Flow — The group adopts a new mantra: let go and let flow.
Location: The nightlife venue
An Unexpected Introduction
A blind date creates discomfort when she discovers an unexpected racial difference. A later encounter and admiration for professional work reopen the possibility of connection.
Key Events
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Let Go Let Flow — The group adopts a new mantra: let go and let flow.
Location: The nightlife venue
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The Blind Date — A coworker arranges a blind date with a landscape architect.
Location: Starbucks
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An Awkward Discovery — She is surprised to discover that her date is white and abruptly leaves after an awkward conversation.
Location: Starbucks
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A Second Encounter — The pair cross paths again at a gathering hosted by the coworker's parents.
Location: A parents' home
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The Landscaped Grounds — She notices the quality of the landscape architect's work on the grounds.
Location: The parents' garden
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A Garden Commission — She hires the landscape architect to transform her neglected garden.
Location: The protagonist's home
The Garden Opens
A garden project brings the pair into regular contact and gradually changes their professional relationship into friendship and romance. The relationship also challenges her rigid ideas about home and identity.
Key Events
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A Garden Commission — She hires the landscape architect to transform her neglected garden.
Location: The protagonist's home
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Work Becomes Friendship — Their professional relationship gradually develops into friendship.
Location: The protagonist's garden
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Comfort At Home — The new relationship encourages her to feel more at ease in her home and within herself.
Location: The protagonist's home
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Pressure From Others — Opinions from close friends and family intensify her uncertainty about the relationship.
Location: The protagonist's family home
Conflict Over Expectations
Outside opinions increase the protagonist's uncertainty. A grocery-store argument about race breaks the relationship and leaves her vulnerable to a more socially approved alternative.
Key Events
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The Grocery Store Argument — A discussion about race becomes heated when the partner resists addressing the subject.
Location: A grocery store
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The Relationship Ends — The argument leads to the dissolution of the developing romance.
Location: A grocery store
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A New Introduction — Her younger brother introduces her to a tax attorney who has recently relocated to Los Angeles.
Location: Los Angeles
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The Approved Match — She begins dating the tax attorney, whose relationship receives strong parental approval.
Location: Los Angeles
Choosing Something New
Dating the approved alternative reveals that social approval cannot replace genuine happiness. She abandons controlling expectations, reunites with her former partner, and marries in the transformed garden.
Key Events
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Happiness Becomes Clear — Her father recognizes that she is less happy than she was in the earlier relationship.
Location: The protagonist's home
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Choosing The Heart — Overwhelmed by her inner dissonance, she rejects controlling expectations and chooses to reunite with her former partner.
Location: The protagonist's garden
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The Garden Wedding — She marries her former partner, with family and friends attending a reception in the transformed garden.
Location: The landscaped garden
Kenya McQueen thought she had it all: a successful career, good friends and family. There was just one thing she didn't have under control: her love life. All that changes when she meets sexy, free-spirited Brian Kelly. But when her ideal man arrives on the scene, Kenya must decide between the relationship everyone expects and the romance no one expected.