Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Illness and Private Fear
Dan reflects on HIV, fading public attention to AIDS, and the difficulty of disclosing his status. Severe pain and the rush toward a hospital bring his fears about illness and mortality closer.
Key Events
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Dan Reflects on AIDS Awareness — Dan reflects on fading public attention to AIDS and the difficulty of disclosing his HIV status. Characters: Dan Schauble
Location: San Francisco
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Fear of Dating and Illness — Dan worries he may become ill before finding a partner and has largely avoided dating. Characters: Dan Schauble
Location: San Francisco
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Severe Pain — Dan suffers severe pain, prompting someone to rush him toward a hospital. Characters: Dan Schauble
Location: Unspecified
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Hospital Rush and Confession — The person rushing Dan apologizes for past wrongs and declares love; Dan insists he is not dying. Characters: Dan Schauble
Location: On the way to a hospital
Family Concern and Friendship
Dan conceals his distress from his mother, who sends him a card and money. Paula and Bob offer friendship, while Dan tries to support Bob through physical and marital difficulties.
Key Events
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A Call from His Mother — Dan's mother calls, and he politely hides how unwell and unsettled he feels. Characters: Dan Schauble, Dan's Mother
Location: Unspecified
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Card and Money Arrive — His mother sends a card and money; Dan promises to spend it on something enjoyable. Characters: Dan Schauble, Dan's Mother
Location: Dan's home
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Friendship Offers Support — Dan's friendship with Paula and Bob provides support as he faces health concerns and daily frustrations. Characters: Dan Schauble, Paula, Bob
Location: Unspecified
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Dan Worries About Bob — Dan notices Bob's aging and physical struggles and offers him a place to stay. Characters: Dan Schauble, Bob
Location: Unspecified
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Bob Declines the Offer — Bob says he can take care of himself despite Dan's offer of a place to stay. Characters: Dan Schauble, Bob
Location: Unspecified
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Bob Discusses His Marriage — Bob reveals unhappiness about his marriage and hopes to get his wife back; Dan asks him to consider her feelings. Characters: Dan Schauble, Bob
Location: Unspecified
A Date Dan Cannot Face
After a pleasant evening, Dan agrees to a date and shares his home phone number. As the date approaches, he admits he is not ready and backs out.
Key Events
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A Pleasant Evening Together — Dan enjoys an evening with someone new and agrees to go on a date. Characters: Dan Schauble
Location: Unspecified
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Dan Shares His Home Number — Between cell phones, Dan gives the new acquaintance his home number. Characters: Dan Schauble
Location: Unspecified
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Dan Cancels the Date — As the date approaches, Dan backs out and says he has been through too much and is not ready to date. Characters: Dan Schauble
Location: Unspecified
A Small Connection Returns
Dan retreats into his apartment, and Paula tells his mother he is depressed. His mother calls and uses humor and familiar conversation to coax him toward making coffee, though his struggle remains unresolved.
Key Events
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Dan Withdraws at Home — After rejecting the date, Dan withdraws into his apartment; Paula tells his mother he is depressed. Characters: Dan Schauble, Paula
Location: Dan's apartment
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His Mother Coaxes Him Out — His mother calls, learns he has stopped drinking coffee, and humorously urges him to make some. Characters: Dan Schauble, Dan's Mother
Location: Dan's apartment