Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Neighbor's Plea
Amy asks Jack to search for her missing daughter, and he agrees despite initially directing her to Missing Persons. His search leads him to a vague address on Turk Street.
Key Events
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Amy Seeks Jack's Help — Amy asks Jack to help find her missing daughter, who ran away with Zip. Characters: Jack Friar, Amy
Location: Outside Jack's home
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Jack Accepts the Search — Although Jack says the case belongs with Missing Persons, Amy's fear persuades him to investigate. Characters: Jack Friar, Amy
Location: Unspecified
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A Vague Address on Turk Street — Jack follows a vague address while searching for the young man. Characters: Jack Friar
Location: Turk Street
The Quarre Household
The Quarres welcome Jack out of the rain, but the household's tensions soon make him realize he is among dangerous people. He becomes a captive witness to their preparations.
Key Events
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The Quarres Offer Shelter — Caught in the rain, Jack is welcomed into the home by Mr. and Mrs. Quarre. Characters: Jack Friar, Mr. Quarre, Mrs. Quarre
Location: The Quarre home
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An Uneasy Household — Jack encounters Erin and Hoop and senses tension among the residents. Characters: Jack Friar, Erin, Hoop, Mr. Quarre, Mrs. Quarre
Location: The Quarre home
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Jack Becomes a Captive Witness — Jack realizes the household is involved in a dangerous scheme and becomes a captive witness. Characters: Jack Friar, Erin, Hoop, Mr. Quarre, Mrs. Quarre
Location: The Quarre home
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The Ten Million Dollar Plan — Jack learns that the group intends to rob a bank and obtain ten million dollars. Characters: Jack Friar, Erin, Hoop, Tyrone
Location: The Quarre home
Money and Divided Loyalties
Jack learns of the planned bank robbery and electronic transfer involving David. Erin recounts part of her past and hopes to leave with David once the money is secured.
Key Events
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A Disruption and Transfer — The plan involves disrupting power and arranging an electronic transfer through banker David Brewster. Characters: Jack Friar, Erin, Hoop, Tyrone, David Brewster
Location: The Quarre home
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David Is Pressured to Help — David is pressured to help move the money as part of the group's scheme. Characters: David Brewster, Tyrone
Location: Unspecified
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Erin Describes Her Past — Erin says she was once a promising musician in Moscow and that Tyrone offered her a way out. Characters: Erin, Jack Friar
Location: The Quarre home
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Erin Hopes to Leave with David — Erin's relationship with David and her hope of leaving with him depend on securing the money. Characters: Erin, David Brewster
Location: Unspecified
Distrust and an Unresolved Offer
Arguments, threats, and Jack's revelations about the Albany escape plan deepen suspicion within the group. Tyrone demands the disk and password, and Jack offers a possible use for his car's flashing lights; the outcome remains unknown.
Key Events
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The Group Turns on Itself — Arguments and threats expose growing instability within the group. Characters: Erin, Hoop, Tyrone, David Brewster
Location: The Quarre home
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Jack Warns Erin — Jack warns Erin that killing him would bring relentless law-enforcement attention. Characters: Jack Friar, Erin
Location: The Quarre home
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Albany Escape Plan Exposed — Jack reveals information about the group's intended escape to Albany, widening distrust. Characters: Jack Friar, Erin, Hoop, Tyrone
Location: The Quarre home
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Tyrone Demands the Credentials — Tyrone demands the disk and password while Erin is caught between him and David. Characters: Erin, Tyrone, David Brewster
Location: The Quarre home
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Jack Offers His Help — With the money and escape plan unresolved, Jack offers help and points to his car's flashing lights. Characters: Jack Friar, Erin, Hoop, Tyrone, David Brewster
Location: The Quarre home