Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Mother's Search for Love and Safety
Caroline wanders with her son Toby and moves to Seattle seeking a decent man and a stable home. She meets Dwight, who courts her and seems ideal, and the marriage quickly proceeds.
Key Events
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Wolffs Arrive in Seattle — Nomadic Caroline seeks a new start and a stable home with Toby. Characters: Caroline, Toby
Location: Seattle, Washington
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Meeting Charming Dwight — Caroline meets Dwight, a man who seems to meet her goals. Characters: Caroline, Dwight
Location: Seattle, Washington
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Marriage Quickly Decided — Caroline accepts Dwight and the marriage proceeds. Characters: Caroline, Dwight
Location: Seattle, Washington
The Mask Slips in Concrete
The family settles into Dwight's home in the isolated town of Concrete, where his domineering nature surfaces. While Caroline is away for weeks, Dwight subjects Toby to emotional, verbal and physical abuse.
Key Events
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New Family in Concrete — Caroline and Toby move into Dwight's small mountain town home. Characters: Caroline, Dwight, Toby
Location: Dwight's home, Concrete
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Domineering Nature Appears — Dwight's dominating personality quickly becomes apparent at home. Characters: Dwight, Caroline, Toby
Location: Dwight's home, Concrete
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Abusive Weeks Without Caroline — Toby suffers emotional, verbal and physical abuse while Caroline is away. Characters: Dwight, Toby
Location: Dwight's home, Concrete
Surviving Years of Cruelty
Caroline remains in the dysfunctional marriage for years even as Toby endures Dwight's reign. Toby finds a fellow misfit in Arthur Gayle, and the two boys begin dreaming of escape from Concrete.
Key Events
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Years of Dysfunction — Caroline stays with Dwight through several dysfunctional years. Characters: Caroline, Dwight, Toby
Location: Concrete, Washington
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Toby Befriends Arthur — Toby becomes friends with the misfit classmate Arthur. Characters: Toby, Arthur Gayle
Location: School in Concrete
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Boys Dream of Escape — Toby wants to join his father; Arthur wants a wider life. Characters: Toby, Arthur Gayle
Location: Concrete, Washington
Forging a Ticket Out
Arthur helps Toby doctor his records while Toby applies to East Coast prep schools. After numerous rejections, The Hill School accepts Toby with a full scholarship, giving him a real way out.
Key Events
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Arthur Helps Forge Records — Arthur helps Toby falsify school records for scholarship applications. Characters: Toby, Arthur Gayle
Location: Concrete, Washington
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Arthur Sees Dwight in Toby — Arthur accuses Toby of behaving like Dwight, straining their friendship. Characters: Arthur Gayle, Toby
Location: Concrete, Washington
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Rejections Keep Arriving — Toby receives numerous rejections from East Coast prep schools. Characters: Toby
Location: Concrete, Washington
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Hill School Scholarship Arrives — Toby is accepted with full scholarship by The Hill School. Characters: Toby
Location: Concrete, Washington
The Last Stand and the Open Road
Dwight's violence finally erupts in a physical argument, and Caroline steps in to defend Toby. Realizing neither has a future with Dwight, mother and son leave him and Concrete together.
Key Events
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Final Violent Confrontation — A physical argument erupts and Caroline defends Toby from Dwight. Characters: Dwight, Caroline, Toby
Location: Dwight's home, Concrete
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Leaving Concrete Behind — Caroline and Toby leave Dwight and the town for good. Characters: Caroline, Toby
Location: Road out of Concrete