Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Descent into the Canyon
The Taylor family embarks on a vacation to the Grand Canyon, where the son discovers mysterious black rocks in a Kiva cavern. The group returns home, unaware of the supernatural consequences of their visit.
Key Events
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Grand Canyon Vacation — Family trip to Arizona with extended family begins. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Grand Canyon, Arizona
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Cave Discovery — Teenage son discovers mysterious black rocks in a cave. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Kiva Cavern
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Return Home — Family returns home after vacation. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Taylor Residence
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Strange Occurrences — Kitchen taps turn on and handprints appear on mirrors. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Taylor Residence
Unraveling Reality
Strange occurrences plague the household, prompting a hospital visit for the daughter and leaving the son in distress. The protagonist researches Anasazi legends, uncovering the truth about bound demons and the required ritual.
Key Events
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Strange Occurrences — Kitchen taps turn on and handprints appear on mirrors. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Taylor Residence
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Hospital Visit — Daughter hospitalized for bulimia, son left with grandmother. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Hospital
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Cat Incident — Son attempts to harm the family cat. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Grandmother's House
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Online Research — Protagonist researches Anasazi legends and bound demons. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Taylor Residence
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Demon Lore Revealed — Discovery that demons take animal shapes and require rock return. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Taylor Residence
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Son's Condition — Son found covered in black marks with bleeding mouth. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Son's Bedroom
Supernatural Onslaught
The son's condition worsens as a supernatural portal reveals itself in his bedroom. The protagonist experiences severe psychological distress while spiritual healers arrive to perform a cleansing ritual.
Key Events
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Son's Condition — Son found covered in black marks with bleeding mouth. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Son's Bedroom
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Nightmare & Drinking — Protagonist experiences wolf nightmare and begins drinking. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Taylor Residence
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Portal Revealed — Fire-damaged wall reveals a supernatural portal. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Son's Bedroom
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Daughter Attacked — Handprints choke the teenage daughter. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Daughter's Room
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Treehouse Vision — Protagonist sees coyote and demon shadow. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Treehouse
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Spiritual Healers Arrive — Teresa and Gloria arrive to perform cleansing ritual. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Taylor Residence
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Cleansing Ritual — Healers chant while son approaches the portal. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Son's Bedroom
Return to the Dark
The son enters the portal with the demons, followed by the protagonist who struggles with fear. The son courageously returns the rocks, banishing the entity and allowing the family to escape safely.
Key Events
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Cleansing Ritual — Healers chant while son approaches the portal. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Son's Bedroom
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Portal Entry — Son walks into the portal with demons. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Portal Dimension
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Fearful Pursuit — Protagonist follows but cannot place rocks due to fear. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Portal Dimension
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Son's Sacrifice — Son places rocks back, banishing demons. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Portal Dimension
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Escape — Protagonist and son jump out of portal together. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Taylor Residence
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House Cleansed — Healer declares evil energy removed. Characters: Bronny Taylor
Location: Taylor Residence
A family returns from a Grand Canyon vacation with a supernatural presence in tow.